P3 T4L7 Mentor Text

1. 1. Which phrases in paragraph 1 shows Lily’s excitement?

2. 2. Which two-word phrase in paragraph 2 tells us that Lily was totally captivated by her sandcastles?

3. 3. List four phrases in paragraph 3 that describe Lily’s shock and panic.

4. 4. Which three word/phrases in paragraph 4 describe Lily’s father’s fear and shock?

5. 5. Identify three phrases in paragraph 5 that are used to describe the urgency of the situation.

6. 6. When writing the story conclusion, we focus on describing the main character’s reflections, emotions, hope and/or lesson learnt. Based on paragraph 6, fill in the table below with the relevant phrases for each element of the conclusion.