Dead Giveaways

People can be so thoughtful and nice.

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• Repetition

• Crazy Logic

• Throwaway Writing

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CCSS.L.11-12.3A

CCSS.L.7.1C

And that is now the end of the story about the brave little cat I met one day.

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• Repetition

• Crazy Logic

• Throwaway Writing

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CCSS.L.11-12.3A

CCSS.L.7.1C

My mom shrieked about approaching strange animals that warned me.

• Vague

• Misplaced Modifier

• Repetition

• Crazy Logic

• Throwaway Writing

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CCSS.L.11-12.3A

CCSS.L.7.1C

He turned his golden eyes toward me, when he turned he almost looked embarrassed.

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• Misplaced Modifier

• Repetition

• Crazy Logic

• Throwaway Writing

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CCSS.L.11-12.3A

CCSS.L.7.1C

Besides, I don't think that we would have laughed nearly as hard if the cookies came out perfect.

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• Repetition

• Crazy Logic

• Throwaway Writing

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CCSS.L.11-12.3A

CCSS.L.7.1C

Many people say that a big house is better, there are other people all over the world who disagree.

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• Misplaced Modifier

• Repetition

• Crazy Logic

• Throwaway Writing

The Statue of Liberty was designed in France because she was made out of copper and steel.

• Vague

• Misplaced Modifier

• Repetition

• Crazy Logic

• Throwaway Writing

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CCSS.L.11-12.3A

CCSS.L.7.1C

I wonder whether there are other things that people like to do with their time.

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• Crazy Logic

• Throwaway Writing

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CCSS.L.11-12.3A

CCSS.L.7.1C

Timothy is a person you should respect, which is the third point of my essay.

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• Misplaced Modifier

• Repetition

• Crazy Logic

• Throwaway Writing

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CCSS.L.11-12.3A

CCSS.L.7.1C

He had a favorite book, since it was called "The House on Mango Street."

• Vague

• Misplaced Modifier

• Repetition

• Crazy Logic

• Throwaway Writing

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CCSS.L.11-12.3A

CCSS.L.7.1C