Narrative Techniques ( character and setting)

Passage 1 – The Last Train to Briar Hill

The mist clung to the platform as if it feared the coming day. Samuel adjusted his scarf and stared at the single lamppost casting its thin glow over the cracked wooden boards. The station was smaller than he’d imagined—just a weathered bench, a ticket booth with peeling paint, and the distant outline of the tracks vanishing into the fog.

A faint hum of machinery in the hills was the only sound. Samuel’s boots tapped against the boards, each step a reminder that he was leaving the only town he’d ever known. He checked his pocket watch again—two minutes to departure—and thought of the letter folded inside his coat. It was the reason for his journey, though he’d told no one what it said.

From the corner of his eye, he saw Mrs. Calloway, the station master’s wife, watching him from the booth. Her sharp eyes seemed to pry into the secret he carried, but her thin smile revealed nothing. Samuel turned away, focusing instead on the fog. Somewhere beyond it lay Briar Hill—and, with it, answers he wasn’t sure he wanted to find.

Which narrative technique does the author use to reveal the setting in the first paragraph?

• A) Imagery describing the platform and its surroundings

• B) Dialogue between Samuel and Mrs. Calloway

• C) Flashback to Samuel’s previous travels

• D) Personification of the train

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Passage 1 – The Last Train to Briar Hill

The mist clung to the platform as if it feared the coming day. Samuel adjusted his scarf and stared at the single lamppost casting its thin glow over the cracked wooden boards. The station was smaller than he’d imagined—just a weathered bench, a ticket booth with peeling paint, and the distant outline of the tracks vanishing into the fog.

A faint hum of machinery in the hills was the only sound. Samuel’s boots tapped against the boards, each step a reminder that he was leaving the only town he’d ever known. He checked his pocket watch again—two minutes to departure—and thought of the letter folded inside his coat. It was the reason for his journey, though he’d told no one what it said.

From the corner of his eye, he saw Mrs. Calloway, the station master’s wife, watching him from the booth. Her sharp eyes seemed to pry into the secret he carried, but her thin smile revealed nothing. Samuel turned away, focusing instead on the fog. Somewhere beyond it lay Briar Hill—and, with it, answers he wasn’t sure he wanted to find.

What does the description of the station's condition reveal about the setting?

• A) It is modern and well-maintained.

• B) It is old, isolated, and slightly neglected.

• C) It is part of a busy travel hub.

• D) It is new and unfamiliar to Samuel.

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Passage 1 – The Last Train to Briar Hill The mist clung to the platform as if it feared the coming day. Samuel adjusted his scarf and stared at the single lamppost casting its thin glow over the cracked wooden boards. The station was smaller than he’d imagined—just a weathered bench, a ticket booth with peeling paint, and the distant outline of the tracks vanishing into the fog. A faint hum of machinery in the hills was the only sound. Samuel’s boots tapped against the boards, each step a reminder that he was leaving the only town he’d ever known. He checked his pocket watch again—two minutes to departure—and thought of the letter folded inside his coat. It was the reason for his journey, though he’d told no one what it said. From the corner of his eye, he saw Mrs. Calloway, the station master’s wife, watching him from the booth. Her sharp eyes seemed to pry into the secret he carried, but her thin smile revealed nothing. Samuel turned away, focusing instead on the fog. Somewhere beyond it lay Briar Hill—and, with it, answers he wasn’t sure he wanted to find. Which detail best reveals something about Samuel’s character?

• A) He ignores the sound of machinery.

• B) He chats with Mrs. Calloway.

• C) He keeps checking his pocket watch.

• D) He sits on the bench.

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Passage 1 – The Last Train to Briar Hill

The mist clung to the platform as if it feared the coming day. Samuel adjusted his scarf and stared at the single lamppost casting its thin glow over the cracked wooden boards. The station was smaller than he’d imagined—just a weathered bench, a ticket booth with peeling paint, and the distant outline of the tracks vanishing into the fog.

A faint hum of machinery in the hills was the only sound. Samuel’s boots tapped against the boards, each step a reminder that he was leaving the only town he’d ever known. He checked his pocket watch again—two minutes to departure—and thought of the letter folded inside his coat. It was the reason for his journey, though he’d told no one what it said.

From the corner of his eye, he saw Mrs. Calloway, the station master’s wife, watching him from the booth. Her sharp eyes seemed to pry into the secret he carried, but her thin smile revealed nothing. Samuel turned away, focusing instead on the fog. Somewhere beyond it lay Briar Hill—and, with it, answers he wasn’t sure he wanted to find.

How does Mrs. Calloway’s presence contribute to the scene?

• A) It provides comic relief.

  
  

•  B) It changes Samuel’s decision to leave.

• C) It gives historical background.

• D) It hints that others may know Samuel’s secret.

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Passage 1 – The Last Train to Briar Hill

The mist clung to the platform as if it feared the coming day. Samuel adjusted his scarf and stared at the single lamppost casting its thin glow over the cracked wooden boards. The station was smaller than he’d imagined—just a weathered bench, a ticket booth with peeling paint, and the distant outline of the tracks vanishing into the fog.

A faint hum of machinery in the hills was the only sound. Samuel’s boots tapped against the boards, each step a reminder that he was leaving the only town he’d ever known. He checked his pocket watch again—two minutes to departure—and thought of the letter folded inside his coat. It was the reason for his journey, though he’d told no one what it said.

From the corner of his eye, he saw Mrs. Calloway, the station master’s wife, watching him from the booth. Her sharp eyes seemed to pry into the secret he carried, but her thin smile revealed nothing. Samuel turned away, focusing instead on the fog. Somewhere beyond it lay Briar Hill—and, with it, answers he wasn’t sure he wanted to find.Which theme is suggested by the combination of setting and Samuel's behavior?

• A) Change often carries both hope and uncertainty.

• B) Secrets are always discovered.

• C) Leaving home guarantees adventure.

• D) Isolation leads to fear.

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Passage 2 – Lanterns Over the Harbor

The winter wind carried the salt of the harbor into every crevice of the small New England town. Margaret tightened her wool coat and stepped carefully along the cobblestone street, her boots slipping now and then on the thin layer of ice. Oil lanterns flickered in the shop windows, casting amber light across the snowbanks that lined the road.

Ahead, the masts of fishing boats swayed in the dark water, ropes creaking against the docks. Margaret’s gaze lingered on the Perseverance, the vessel her father had captained until the fever took him last spring. Since then, she had avoided the harbor—too many memories in every coil of rope and every shout of the deckhands.

Tonight, though, she had no choice. The meeting at the harbor master’s office would determine whether her family kept their slip for the season. Without it, her brother’s small boat, Wren, would have no place to dock, and their income would vanish with the tide. Margaret squared her shoulders, feeling the sting of the wind on her cheeks, and pushed forward toward the glow of the office windows.

Which technique does the author use to establish the setting in the first paragraph?

• A) Dialogue between townspeople

• B) Imagery of sights, sounds, and smells

• C) Foreshadowing of a storm

• D) Personification of the boats

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Passage 2 – Lanterns Over the Harbor

The winter wind carried the salt of the harbor into every crevice of the small New England town. Margaret tightened her wool coat and stepped carefully along the cobblestone street, her boots slipping now and then on the thin layer of ice. Oil lanterns flickered in the shop windows, casting amber light across the snowbanks that lined the road.

Ahead, the masts of fishing boats swayed in the dark water, ropes creaking against the docks. Margaret’s gaze lingered on the Perseverance, the vessel her father had captained until the fever took him last spring. Since then, she had avoided the harbor—too many memories in every coil of rope and every shout of the deckhands.

Tonight, though, she had no choice. The meeting at the harbor master’s office would determine whether her family kept their slip for the season. Without it, her brother’s small boat, Wren, would have no place to dock, and their income would vanish with the tide. Margaret squared her shoulders, feeling the sting of the wind on her cheeks, and pushed forward toward the glow of the office windows.

What does Margaret’s reaction to the Perseverance reveal about her?

• A) She dislikes fishing.

• B) She is afraid of water.

• C) She avoids the harbor because of painful memories.

• D) She doesn’t like the crew.

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Passage 3 – The House on Alder Street

Rain slicked the narrow street, turning the scattered leaves into dark, matted clumps. Detective Lina Perez stepped carefully over a deep puddle, her eyes fixed on the house at the end of the block. Its shutters banged in the wind, and the faint glow of a single upstairs window cut through the gray afternoon.

The neighborhood had been quiet for months, ever since Mr. Greaves vanished without a word. Most people in town avoided Alder Street now, muttering about bad luck and strange noises. But Perez wasn’t here for rumors—she had an evidence file in her coat pocket, and a court order in her bag.

As she reached the gate, a low creak echoed from somewhere inside the house. She froze, scanning the cracked steps and peeling paint. Someone had lit that lamp upstairs recently—she could still see its reflection trembling in the puddles on the walk. Perez took a breath, tightened her grip on the umbrella handle, and stepped onto the porch.

What does the house’s description reveal about it?

• It is a modern rental.

• It is owned by the city.

• It is a welcoming home.

• It has been neglected and is shrouded in secrecy.

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Passage 3 – The House on Alder Street

Rain slicked the narrow street, turning the scattered leaves into dark, matted clumps. Detective Lina Perez stepped carefully over a deep puddle, her eyes fixed on the house at the end of the block. Its shutters banged in the wind, and the faint glow of a single upstairs window cut through the gray afternoon.

The neighborhood had been quiet for months, ever since Mr. Greaves vanished without a word. Most people in town avoided Alder Street now, muttering about bad luck and strange noises. But Perez wasn’t here for rumors—she had an evidence file in her coat pocket, and a court order in her bag.

As she reached the gate, a low creak echoed from somewhere inside the house. She froze, scanning the cracked steps and peeling paint. Someone had lit that lamp upstairs recently—she could still see its reflection trembling in the puddles on the walk. Perez took a breath, tightened her grip on the umbrella handle, and stepped onto the porch.

Which detail reveals something about Perez’s character?

• A) She carries an evidence file and court order.

• B) She notices the leaves on the ground.

• C) She uses an umbrella.

• D) She avoids the porch.

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Passage 4 – Crossing White Hollow

The snow was deeper than Nora had expected, swallowing her boots with each step. The air smelled sharp, like pine needles and cold metal, and the wind pushed at her back as if urging her forward. Somewhere beyond the ridge lay White Hollow Cabin, where her team had agreed to meet before nightfall.

She paused to catch her breath, pulling her map from inside her coat. The trail she’d followed for the last hour had vanished under fresh drifts, and the fading daylight made the printed lines blur. Still, she traced her finger toward the small black square marked Cabin, willing herself to believe she was close.

From the corner of her eye, Nora spotted a line of animal tracks leading in the same direction she was headed. They were fresh, sharper at the edges than the ones she’d seen earlier. Whether they belonged to a deer or something else, she didn’t know—but the sight quickened her pace.

Which technique is used to show the harshness of the setting?

• A) Dialogue with another hiker

• B) Foreshadowing of a storm

• C) Flashback to past hikes

• D) Imagery of snow, wind, and cold air

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