Revising and Editing | 4/1/25

What change, if any, should be made to the sentence?

I was hungry, and ready to eat Grandma's apple pie.

• Delete the comma

• Change and to I was

• Change hungry to hungrey

• The sentence is correct.

Tags

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

What is the correct way to write the sentence?

I took some yummy soup to my Grandmother, who was not feeling well.

• Change took to tooken

• Change soup to soop

• Change Grandmother to grandmother

• The sentence is correct as written.

Tags

CCSS.L.2.2C

What change, if any, should be made to the sentence?

This is an important part of our saturday outing.

• Change important to more important

• Change an to a

• Change saturday to Saturday

• The sentence is correct.

Tags

CCSS.L.1.2A

CCSS.L.2.2A

CCSS.L.3.2A

CCSS.L.4.2A

CCSS.L.K.2A

Which revision, if any, should be made to the sentence?

Maggies' dress was the most beautiful dress at the dance.

• Change most beautiful to more beautiful

• Change Maggies’ to Maggie’s

• Change dance to danse

• No revision is needed

Tags

CCSS.L.3.1G

What is the correct way to write the two sentences?

Jeremy had basketball practice. Jeremy also having homework.

• Jeremy had basketball practice, but he also had homework.

• Jeremy had basketball practice, Jeremy also had homework to do.

• Jeremy had basketball practice, because Jeremy also had homework to do.

• The two sentences are correct.

Tags

CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.5.1E