4.7 Revising and Editing

What change, if any, needs to be made in sentence 3?

• Change 'for my family' to 'in my family'

• Change 'are not taken' to 'is not taken'

• Change 'lightly' to 'light'

• No change needs to be made in sentence 3.

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 4?

• Change 'loded' to 'loaded'

• Change 'hours' to 'ours'

• Change 'to get' to 'got'

• Make no change

What change should be made in sentence 8?

• Change 'temperatures' to 'tempatures'

• Change 'outsied' to 'outside'

• Change 'July' to 'july'

• Change 'were' to 'where'

What change should be made in sentence 13?

• Change 'Families' to 'Familys'

• Change 'by the cars' to 'in the cars'

• Change 'began' to 'have begun'

• Change 'drive' to 'driven'