Revise and Edit Questions

Choose the correctly written sentence.

• Since she forgot to revise and edit, her essay received a low score.

• Since, she forgot to revise and edit her essay received a low score.

• Since she forgot to revise and edit her essay, received a low score.

Choose the correctly written sentence.

• After I heard about the upcoming parade I wanted to be the first in line.

• After I heard, about the upcoming parade I wanted to be the first in line.

• After I heard about the upcoming parade, I wanted to be the first in line.

What is the most effective way to revise sentence 2?

• This could honestly go either way. There are so many good things and bad things that electronics can bring about.

• This could honestly go either way, but there are so many good things and bad things.

• There are so many good things; this could honestly go either way and an almost equal number of bad things.

• No change needs to be made.

What DON'T you do when you edit?

• Add new ideas

• Fix the grammar

• Fix Spelling Mistakes

• Add punctuations

What do you type in this question?

• RACE

• Write about what is repeated

• Rewrite the sentence 28 and remove the repeated words

• leave it as is

Choose the best written sentence.

• My mother forgot to lock the door to the backyard; however, the dog escaped from the yard.

• My mother forgot to lock the door to the backyard; furthermore, the dog escaped from the yard.

• My mother forgot to lock the door to the backyard; consequently, the dog escaped from the yard.

Choose the sentence with correct use of commas.

• If you do well on STAAR test it will prove you worked hard all year long.

• If, you do well on STAAR test it will prove you worked hard all year long.

• If you do well on STAAR test, it will prove you worked hard all year long.

Choose the sentence with the correct use of commas.

• We all met on Saturday ,for the game but it started to rain.

• We all met on Saturday for the game ,but it started to rain.

• We all met on Saturday for the game but it started to rain.

What is the BEST way to revise sentence 14?

• After we got off the ferry and into a rental car, wildlife is what my mother began looking for and a good place to turn off the road.

• After we got off the ferry and into a rental car, my mother began looking for a good place to turn off the road to look for wildlife.

• After we got off the ferry to begin looking for wildlife, we were into a rental car, and my mother was looking for a good place to turn off.

• After we got off the ferry and into a rental car and began looking for wildlife, my mother began looking for a good place.

Which sentence should replace sentence 3 to create a more effective introduction to this paper?

• Fortunately, we live close to the coast and are able to make frequent trips to the beach.

• Additionally, my favorite family activity is movie night, especially when the movie is about animals.

• Truthfully, I have a hard time deciding what to bring with me, and I typically pack too much.

• Admittedly, I have at times been less than thrilled to tag along on these wild excursions.