Revise and Edit Words

Nina has used a poor choice of words in sentence 29. She should change Okay to ̶

• Sure

• Neat

• Proud

• Up

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CCSS.L.1.1J

CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.4.1C

What is the correct way to write sentence 3?

• “I’m sorry, Mom,” Barbara replied as she walked slowly into the kitchen.

• “I’m sorry, Mom,” Barbara replied, walked slowly into the kitchen.

• “I’m sorry, Mom,” Barbara replied; walking slowly into the kitchen.

• “I’m sorry, Mom,” Barbara replied as she walked, slowly into the kitchen.

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CCSS.L.3.2C

CCSS.L.4.2B

CCSS.L.6.3A

How should sentence 5 be changed?

• Change I to you

• Change weren’t finished to wasn’t finished

• Change my to you

• Sentence 5 should not be changed.

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CCSS.L.3.2C

CCSS.L.4.2B

CCSS.L.6.3A

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 10?

• Change I to me

• Change are tired to am tired

• Change from to for

• No change should be made in this sentence.

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CCSS.L.1.1D

CCSS.L.3.1A

Use the following sentences to answer the question.

(21) Working outside builds physical skills and exposes teens to a different kind of work environment than working indoors does. (22) Since adults spend much of their lives at work, knowing this will always be valuable.

Justine wants to use a more appropriate word than this in sentence 22. Which phrase could best replace the word this?

• how to work outside

• about different work situations

• where to find a job

• what is common for teens

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CCSS.RI.7.2

CCSS.RI.8.2

CCSS.RL.6.2

CCSS.RL.7.2

CCSS.RL.8.2

What change, if any, needs to be made in sentence 11?

• Change ones to wons

• Change available to availible

• Change grosery to grocery

• Sentence 11 does not need to be changed.

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CCSS.L.1.1B

CCSS.L.2.2C

CCSS.L.3.2D

How should sentence 19 be changed?

• Change know to no

• Change it’s to its

• Change mom to Mom

• No change needs to be made.

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CCSS.L.1.1B

CCSS.L.2.2C

CCSS.L.3.2D

What change, if any, needs to be made in sentence 28?

• Change though to tho

• Change the comma after surprised to a semicolon

• Change feel to fill

• Sentence 28 does not need to be changed.

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CCSS.L.9-10.2A

What does it mean to REVISE your writing? Pick 2

• Fix spelling errors

• Fix capitalization errors

• Add or remove words and sentences

• Move words or substitute synonyms for words

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CCSS.L.7.6

CCSS.L.8.6

CCSS.W.6.2D

CCSS.W.7.2D

CCSS.W.8.2D

What does it mean to EDIT your writing? Pick 2

• Fix spelling errors

• Fix capitalization errors

• Add or remove words and sentences

• Move words or substitute synonyms for words

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CCSS.L.6.6

CCSS.L.7.6

CCSS.L.8.6

CCSS.W.7.2D

CCSS.W.8.2D