Revising and Editing with WEIRDO

Revising Strategy: W: _________ repeat

Revising Strategy: E: _________ moves

Revising Strategy: I: __________ deleted

Revising Strategy: R: ___________ sentence

Revising Strategy: D: _________ make sense

Revising Strategy: O: ____ topic

Revising Vocabulary: Clarity

• the quality of being clear

• not needed because it's already been said (wordy and repetitive)

• necessary (needed); related to the topic

• sudden; broken off

Revising Vocabulary: Redundant

• producing a desired effect

• not needed because it's already been said (wordy and repetitive)

• necessary (needed); related to the topic

• sudden; broken off

Revising Vocabulary: Relevant

• producing a desired effect

• fits the purpose

• necessary (needed); related to the topic

• sudden; broken off

Revising Vocabulary: Abrupt

• producing a desired effect

• not needed because it's already been said (wordy and repetitive)

• the quality of being clear

• sudden; broken off