What change should be made in sentence 1?

• Change learned to has learned

• Change cruise to cruises

• Insert a comma after parents

• Change ocean to Ocean

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CCSS.RI.5.3

CCSS.RI.5.5

CCSS.RI.6.3

CCSS.RI.6.5

CCSS.RI.7.3

What change should be made in sentence 4?

• Change which to when

• Change an affect to an effect

• Insert a comma after moon

• Change didn't know to did know

What change should be made in sentence 7?

• Change than to then

• Change is to are

• Change A full to An full

• Change strongest to stronger

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CCSS.RI.5.5

CCSS.RI.6.3

CCSS.RI.6.5

CCSS.RI.7.3

CCSS.RI.7.5

Harriet would like to add a more effective controlling idea. Which sentence should replace sentence 1 to serve as a more effective controlling idea for her composition?

• Extreme weather has been a problem from some time now.

• People need to be aware of the things that happen when they make things.

• Some scientists believe that the world is experiencing more extreme weather than ever before.

• Some scientists think we need to take care of the planet before it is too late.

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CCSS.RI.5.2

CCSS.RI.6.2

CCSS.RL.5.2

CCSS.RL.6.2

CCSS.RL.7.2

Harriet has not used the MOST effective word in sentence 3. Which word should replace distressing in this sentence?

• concerning

• troubling

• moving

• affecting

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CCSS.RI.4.5

CCSS.RI.5.5

CCSS.RI.6.5

CCSS.RI.7.5

CCSS.RI.8.5

What is the BEST way to combine sentences 9 and 10?

• The sun’s rays go through the glass to create a warm atmosphere, and also, it prevents the heat from leaving.

• The sun’s rays go through the glass to create a warm atmosphere, but also, it prevents the heat from leaving.

• The sun’s rays go through the glass to create a warm atmosphere, since also it prevents the heat from leaving.

• The sun’s rays go through the glass to create a warm atmosphere, also prevents the heat from leaving.

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CCSS.L.1.1G

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.5.1A

CCSS.L.5.1E

Harriet wants to add a transition at the beginning of sentence 16 to improve the connection to the previous sentence. Which transition should Harriet add to the beginning of sentence 16?

• However

• Therefore

• Not only that

• Moreover

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CCSS.RI.5.2

CCSS.RI.6.2

CCSS.RI.7.2

CCSS.RL.5.2

CCSS.RL.6.2

What is the MOST effective way to revise sentence 27?

• Humans can’t live without modern inventions such as stoves, refrigerators, and light bulbs, because they have to think of ways to help make the problem better.

• Humans can’t live without modern inventions such as stoves, refrigerators, and light bulbs, so they have to think of ways to help make the problem better.

• Humans can’t live without modern inventions such as stoves, refrigerators, and light bulbs so they have to think of ways to help make the problem better.

• Humans can’t live without modern inventions such as stoves, refrigerators, and light bulbs, since they have to think of ways to help make the problem better.

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CCSS.RI.5.3

CCSS.RI.6.3

CCSS.RI.6.5

CCSS.RI.7.3

CCSS.RI.7.5

Harriet wants to improve the conclusion to her paper. Which sentence should be added after sentence 33 to bring this composition to a more effective conclusion?

• Everyone should think about how to solve this important problem that affects us all.

• The world hopes that young people can find a solution to this problem.

• Since no one can stop natural disasters, we need to stop extreme weather.

• The future of the Earth rests in everyone’s hands now, but even more in young people who can make a big difference!