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Esther was married to an artist, which was the opposite of what the society expected from. (Al-Qassem)

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Sometimes we have to challenge them (referring to social norms) like Esther and her father way of being parents, Esther's father opinion on the marriage and their decision. (Al-Qassam)

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They are inconsistent with Esther's behavior and how she and her family defy the social norms of the parlicular as described by one of the town's people. (Raidaa)

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That Of course was shock to the town's women because in their traditions mothers should tell these information to her daughter. (Raidaa)

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Moreover, Esther's decision discribes and disaproves by a group of women who know her. (Zaina)

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The social norms is, however, challenges by Esther and her family including her father and husband throug Esther's actions and decesion, Esther's fathers support and encourgement , and Esther's husband understanding and solidarity. (Zaina)

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Although she was nice to the village children as it is mention in the story, "she was nice to the us children," Ester didn't treat her child nicely (Zaina)

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To explain, Esther neglected her daughter and threw her to the flood, which was not the mother's role in their society. (Al-Qassam)

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In addition, her father was by her side and they lived together until his death (Al-Qassam)

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Not only does Mrs. Briggs criticize Esther's teenagehood, but she also criticizes her motherhood.

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