Rockin' Review: R&E: Pay It Forward/Home

5. Derrick wants to further develop the central idea of this paper by adding a detail after sentence 3. Which of these sentences could BEST follow and support sentence 3?

• A. Pay it forward today if you have an opportunity to do this.

• B. That means they're doing something nice by helping another person who may be in need.

• C. This is different and not the same as paying someone back.

• D. I had a friend who helped me when I had to clean out my garage.

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CCSS.RI.3.2

CCSS.RI.4.2

CCSS.RL.4.1

CCSS.RL.5.1

CCSS.RL.5.2

6. Derrick has not used the most effective transition at the beginning of sentence 10. Derrick should change As a result to -

• F. To conclude

• G. For example

• H. Instead

• J. In other words

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CCSS.RI.3.3

CCSS.RI.4.3

CCSS.RI.4.5

CCSS.RI.5.3

CCSS.RI.5.5

7. What is the most effective revision to make in sentence 19?

• A. In 2003 the customers set a record in Connecticut, and it was at a drive-through coffee shop, which was there.

• B. In 2003 the customers at a drive-through coffee shop in Connecticut set a record.

• C. In 2003, at a drive-through coffee shop, the customers set a record it was in Connecticut.

• D. In 2003 there were customers at a drive-through coffee shop in Connecticut that set a record at the shop.

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CCSS.RI.3.3

CCSS.RI.4.3

CCSS.RI.4.5

CCSS.RI.5.3

CCSS.RI.5.5

8. Derrick's paper ends abruptly. Which sentence can be added to the end of this paper to close it more effectively?

• F. It's nice!

• G. I sure would!

• H. Say thanks!

• J. Pay it forward!

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CCSS.RI.3.5

CCSS.RI.4.3

CCSS.RI.4.5

CCSS.RI.5.3

CCSS.RI.5.5

17. What change needs to be made in sentence2?

• A. Change lumbered to lumbering

• B. Change not to she was not

• C. Change quiet to quite

• D. No change needs to be made in sentence 2.

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CCSS.RI.4.5

CCSS.RI.5.5

CCSS.RI.6.5

CCSS.RI.7.5

CCSS.RI.8.5

18. What change should be made in sentence 6?

• F. Delete As

• G. Change draged to dragged

• H. Change felt to feeled

• J. Insert a comma afer dry

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CCSS.RI.3.3

CCSS.RI.3.5

CCSS.RI.4.3

CCSS.RI.4.5

CCSS.RI.5.3

19. How should sentence 11 be changed?

• A. Change poked to pokked

• B. Change an egg to a egg

• C. Change threw to through

• D. Sentence 11 should not be changed.

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CCSS.RI.3.5

CCSS.RI.4.3

CCSS.RI.4.5

CCSS.RI.5.3

CCSS.RI.5.5

20. What change needs to be made in sentence 15?

• F. Change reaching to reeching

• G. Change splashes to splashed

• H. Change furiously to furious

• J. No change needs to be made.

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CCSS.RI.3.3

CCSS.RI.3.5

CCSS.RI.4.3

CCSS.RI.4.5

CCSS.RI.5.3

21. What change should be made in sentence 18?

• A. Change sevaral to several

• B. Change far to she was far

• C. Change waters to water's

• D. Change the period to a comma

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CCSS.RI.3.3

CCSS.RI.3.5

CCSS.RI.4.3

CCSS.RI.4.5

CCSS.RI.5.5

22. What change needs to be made in sentence 24?

• F. Change found to finds

• G. Change began to begun

• H. Change her work to their work

• J. No change needs to be made in this sentence.

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CCSS.RI.3.3

CCSS.RI.3.5

CCSS.RI.4.3

CCSS.RI.4.5

CCSS.RI.5.5