It Takes Science - Revise & Edit

What change should be made in Sentence 2?

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CCSS.W.8.4

CCSS.W.8.5

What change should be made in sentence 4?

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CCSS.W.8.4

CCSS.W.8.5

What change should be made in sentence 6?

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CCSS.W.8.4

CCSS.W.8.5

What is the correct way to write sentence 2?

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CCSS.W.8.4

CCSS.W.8.5

What change should be made in sentence 4?

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CCSS.W.8.5

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 6?

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CCSS.W.8.4

CCSS.W.8.5

Greg would like to provide more effective controlling idea for his paper. Which sentence should replace sentence 8 to effectively state the controlling idea of this paper?

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CCSS.W.8.1A

CCSS.W.8.1B

Greg would like to use a more appropriate word in sentence 14. Which word should replace lower in this sentence?

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CCSS.L.8.4A

CCSS.L.8.4B

CCSS.L.8.5C

Which sentence in the third paragraph (sentences 16-23) is extraneous and should be deleted?

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CCSS.RI.8.1

CCSS.RL.8.1

Greg would like to provide a more effective closing in the fourth paragraph (sentences 24-30). Which sentence should replace sentence 30 to accomplish this goal?

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CCSS.W.8.1E

CCSS.W.8.2F