Editing For Wordiness

He's coming over to my house in order to have band practice.

• coming over

• in order

• band

• band practice

Tags

CCSS.L.8.1A

Since the dawn of time, owls have hunted their prey at night.

• Since

• Since the dawn of time

• have hunted

• at night

Tags

CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.2.1E

CCSS.L.3.1G

There are many people that are protesting the new city policy in front of City Hall.

(Choose all that apply)

• many people

• There are

• new city

• front of

• that

Tags

CCSS.L.3.1A

Angie Thomas shows the reader that Starr is a young girl who is searching for her true identity.

(Choose all that apply)

• Angie Thomas shows

• young

• the reader

• is searching

• that

Tags

CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.6.1A

CCSS.L.6.1C

CCSS.L.6.1D

From my perspective, it seems obvious that romantic high school relationships are a terrible idea.

(Choose all that apply)

• From my perspective

• it seems obvious

• that

• romantic

• high school

Tags

CCSS.L.3.1A

Which choice most concisely replaces the underlined words:

Many people are under the impression that mushrooms are disgusting.

• hope

• deny

• think

• argue

Tags

CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.3.1D