Editing- A Colony on Mars

What change needs to be made in sentence 6?

• Change Although the idea to The idea

• Insert a comma after intriguing

• Change something to nothing

• No change needs to be made in sentence 6.

How should sentence 9 be changed?

• Change were to was

• Change the comma to a semicolon

• Insert a comma after people

• Change supply's to supplies

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 11

• Change is to was

• Change simply to simpley

• Change to far to too far

• No change should be made in this sentence.

How should sentence 14 be changed?

• Change researchers to researcher's

• Change institute of technology to Institute of Technology

• Change disagree to disagreeing

• Sentence 14 should not be changed.

What is the correct way to write sentence 16?

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• D

What change needs to be made in sentence 21?

• Change say to said

• Change there to they're

• Delete with

• Change subsaquent to subsequent

What is the correct way to write sentence 23?

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• D

How should sentence 24 be changed?

• Change we take care to you take care

• Change our own planet to our no planet

• Change the period to a question mark

• Sentence 24 should not be changed.