Revising and Editing

Last summer, my family and I camped by the Mississippi river.

• change family to Family
• change I to me
• change river to River
• The sentence is correct.

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CCSS.L.1.2A

CCSS.L.2.2A

CCSS.L.3.2A

CCSS.L.4.2A

CCSS.L.K.2A

Mom surprised us all when she declared, "let's all go get pizza!"

• Delete the quotation marks
• Change let's to Let's
• Remove the comma after declared
• The sentence is correct.

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CCSS.L.3.2C

CCSS.L.4.2B

CCSS.L.5.2D

Joseph said he knew his uncles had thrown a party for theirselves.

• Change knew to new
• Change thrown to threw
• Change theirselves to themselves
• No change is needed.

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CCSS.L.2.1C

CCSS.L.2.1D

CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.6.1B

Natalies' flower was the most beautiful I had ever seen.

• Change most beautiful to more beautiful
• ^{Change Natalies' to Natalies's}
• Change flower to flour
• No change is needed

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CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.3.2D

The S.S. Edmund Fitzgerald was a giant freight ship that operated in the great Lakes

• Great Lakes

• great lakes

• Great lakes

• correct as is

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CCSS.L.1.2A

CCSS.L.2.2A

CCSS.L.3.2A

CCSS.L.4.2A

CCSS.L.K.2A

During its time, it set records for hawling the most iron

• it's

• its'

• it is

• correct as is

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CCSS.L.3.1A

from wisconsin mines to ironworks in Michigan Ohio

• Wisconson

• Wisconsin

• wisconson

• correct as is

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CCSS.L.1.2A

CCSS.L.2.2A

CCSS.L.3.2A

CCSS.L.4.2A

CCSS.L.K.2A

On Nov. 10 1975,

• November 10 1975

• November 10, 1975,

• November, 10 1975,

• correct as is

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CCSS.L.2.2B

CCSS.L.3.2B

CCSS.L.3.2C

CCSS.L.4.2B

CCSS.L.6.2A

the ship sank during a strom

• sorm

• strem

• storm

• correct as is

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CCSS.L.3.1D

CCSS.L.4.1B

CCSS.L.5.1.B-D

CCSS.L.5.1C

CCSS.L.5.1D

The event inspired singer Gordon Lightfoot to write the song "The Wreck of the edmund fitzgerald."

• Edmund Fitzgerald

• Edmund fitzgerald

• Edmund. Fitzgerald

• correct as is

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CCSS.L.1.2B

CCSS.L.5.2