Revising Writing for Clarity

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Iona had a terrible cold for several day.

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several days

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Blowing nose, sneezing, coughing.

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She's, her

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Aspirin and coffee syrup since the weekend, watching her favorite show.

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coffee, at home, loved

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Talking to her mother on the phone every day has made her well.

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every day, made, well

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She'll be well again, wonders when she can return to work. Tired of coughing, sneezing, and complaining.

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and she wonders..., tired

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She's been eating chicken soup and drinking orange juice for a few days.

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been eating, a couple of days