Revising and Strengthening Opinion Essays

This video tutorial guides students on how to revise an opinion essay to make their argument stronger. It covers the writing process stages, focusing on revising drafts by enhancing word choice and sentence structure. The lesson uses 'The Tale of Peter Rabbit' as an example, demonstrating how to replace weak words with more impactful ones and add details to support the opinion. The final steps include editing and publishing the essay.

What is the first step in revising an opinion essay?

• Adding more paragraphs

• Writing a new draft

• Rereading the draft

• Publishing the essay

Which stage involves adding linking words and phrases?

• Stage 2

• Stage 4

• Stage 3

• Stage 1

What should you focus on to make your opinion stronger?

• The number of paragraphs

• The reasons and evidence

• The length of the essay

• The font size

What is the second step in strengthening your opinion?

• Write a conclusion

• Change the topic

• Add more examples

• Ask yourself how to make your opinion stronger

Which word was replaced to better convey Peter's fear?

• Afraid

• Scared

• Nervous

• Terrified

What phrase was used to replace 'scared'?

• Shivering with terror

• Shaking with fear

• Trembling with fright

• Quivering with anxiety

What was Peter's condition after his adventure in the garden?

• Unchanged

• Energetic

• Slightly tired

• Completely worn out

What is the next step after revising the draft?

• Starting a new essay

• Editing the draft

• Publishing the essay

• Adding more paragraphs

What is the final step in the writing process?

• Revising the draft

• Editing the draft

• Writing a new draft

• Publishing the essay

What is the purpose of revising an opinion essay?

• To change the topic

• To add more characters

• To make the opinion stronger

• To make it longer