Improving Your Personal Narrative with Detailed Language

This video tutorial teaches how to enhance personal narratives by using detailed language. It covers the writing process, common mistakes, and the importance of sensory details. The instructor demonstrates how to improve a draft by adding sensory descriptions, making the story more engaging. The lesson concludes with a recap of the steps to enhance narratives.

Describe a moment from the draft that could be made more interesting with detailed description.

What feelings did the narrator experience when approaching Mr. Robinson's door?

Reflect on how the narrator's revisions improved the narrative. What changes were made?