Realistic Fiction Writing for Kids Episode 6: Revising Your Story

The video tutorial focuses on revising a realistic fiction story. It emphasizes the importance of revising by rereading and making changes to improve the story. The instructor demonstrates revising different parts of a story, including the introduction, middle, and closing, by adding descriptive words and varying dialogue tags. The video concludes with encouragement to repeatedly revise for the best results and invites viewers to explore more writing videos.

How did the author improve the sentence about the cold in the story?

What lesson did Mary learn at the end of the story regarding being careful in the snow?