Exploring Sensory Details in Storytelling

The video tutorial focuses on enhancing writing by using sensory details to create vivid imagery. It begins with an introduction to sensory details, followed by examples from student writings. The tutorial discusses the use of exaggeration to convey emotions and demonstrates how to revise a scene by incorporating sensory details. The lesson concludes with a summary and a homework assignment to practice these skills.

What is the main focus of today's lesson?

• Using metaphors in writing

• Practicing grammar rules

• Adding sensory details to make writing vivid

• Learning about historical events

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CCSS.RI.8.4

CCSS.RI.9-10.4

CCSS.RI.9-10.4

CCSS.RL.8.4

CCSS.RL.9-10.4

Which sensory detail is NOT mentioned in the introduction?

• Temperature

• Sound

• Taste

• Sight

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CCSS.RI.6.4

CCSS.RI.8.4

CCSS.RI.9-10.4

CCSS.RI.9-10.4

CCSS.RL.7.4

What was the student's favorite feature of her puppy?

• Deep brown eyes

• Fluffy gold fur

• Small apricot ears

• Tiny black nose

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CCSS.RI.11-12.5

CCSS.RI.6.5

CCSS.RI.7.5

CCSS.RI.8.5

CCSS.RI.9-10.5

Which adjective is used to describe the puppy's ears?

• Small

• Tiny

• Deep

• Fluffy

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CCSS.RI.11-12.5

CCSS.RI.6.5

CCSS.RI.7.5

CCSS.RI.8.5

CCSS.RI.9-10.5

What makes the student's description of her puppy effective?

• Use of dialogue

• Use of sensory details and adjectives

• Use of strong verbs

• Use of historical references

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CCSS.RI.11-12.5

CCSS.RI.6.5

CCSS.RI.7.5

CCSS.RI.8.5

CCSS.RI.9-10.5

What did the student wish for instead of the new house?

• A wrecking ball

• A bigger garden

• A new car

• A new school

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CCSS.RL.6.4

CCSS.RL.7.10

CCSS.RL.7.4

CCSS.RL.9-10.10

CCSS.RL.9-10.9

What emotion is conveyed through the student's exaggeration about the new house?

• Excitement

• Confusion

• Happiness

• Anger

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CCSS.RL.2.6

CCSS.RL.8.3

What smell did Mr. Spinelli remember when he walked into the Parker office?

• Flowers

• Food

• Coffee

• Fresh paint

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CCSS.RI.7.1

CCSS.RL.6.2

CCSS.RL.7.2

CCSS.RL.8.1

CCSS.RL.9-10.2

What song was Mr. Spinelli tapping his foot to?

• Dynamite by Taio Cruz

• Happy by Pharrell Williams

• Rolling in the Deep by Adele

• Uptown Funk by Bruno Mars

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CCSS.RI. 9-10.1

CCSS.RI.6.1

CCSS.RI.8.1

CCSS.RL.8.1

CCSS.RL.9-10.2

What feeling did Mr. Spinelli describe while waiting for his interview?

• Excitement

• Joy

• Calmness

• Anxiety

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CCSS.RL.2.6

CCSS.RL.8.3