A.R.M.S. Revising

Which sentence is better?

• The doughnut was good.

• The chocolate-glazed doughnut delighted my tastebuds.

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CCSS.L.1.1F

CCSS.L.2.1E

Read the paragraph and decide which sentence needs to be removed:

Sports that require special equipment are hockey, football, and baseball.  The special equipment helps to keep the players safe.  All three sports require a special helmet and knee pads.  I like to swim.  

• I like to swim.

• The special equipment helps to keep the players safe.

Which sentence is written correctly?

• She saw a puppy and a kitten on the way to the store.

• On the way to the store, she saw a puppy and a kitten.

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CCSS.L.11-12.3A

CCSS.L.7.1C

Which of the following is a BORING and OVERUSED word that you should always try to replace in your writing? 

• Delightful

• Incredible

• Pleasing

• Good

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CCSS.L.4.6

CCSS.RI.4.4

CCSS.RI.5.4

CCSS.W.4.2D

CCSS.W.5.2D

Which acronym will you use when revising your writing?

• ARMS

• PEMDAS

• GOAT

• BRB