Revising

What is the first step to revising?

• taking away information

• re-reading your writing

What did she do to revise her work?

• add more details to make her story more interesting

• add transition words

Tags

CCSS.RL.2.6

CCSS.RL.8.3

What could she replace the word "said" with?

• yelled

• shouted

• cried

• All of the above.

Tags

CCSS.RL.4.10

CCSS.RL.4.6

CCSS.RL.3.6

CCSS.RL.3.10

CCSS.RL.5.10

Why is it important to revise your story?

• My teacher tells me to.

• I revise so I can create the best story.

Tags

CCSS.RL.4.6

CCSS.RL.4.10

CCSS.RL.5.10

CCSS.RL.5.6

CCSS.RL.3.10