Ruby Franke Revising and Editing

1. 1. What change, if any, should be made in sentence 1?

• A Change happens to happen

• B Add a comma after influencer

• C Change influencer to influencers

• D No change is needed.

2. 2. What change should be made in sentence 7?

• A Change was to were

• B Delete the comma after harshly

• C Change shamed to shame

• D Change moments to moment’s

3. 3. What change should be made in sentence 9?

• A Delete the word however

• B Add a comma after however

• C Change calling to call

• D Change removed to remove

4. 4. What change should be made in sentence 14?

• A Change woman to women

• B Add a comma after Franke

• C Change aggrivated to agrivated

• D Change charged to charging

5. 5. What change should be made in sentence 19?

• A Change It to They

• B Change also to to

• C Add a comma after ideas

• D Delete the comma after risks

6. 6. Monica wants to add a supporting sentence to the second paragraph (sentences 4–9). Which sentence should be added after sentence 6?

• A Many YouTube families share everything from vacations to discipline.

• B Franke believed in being open with her audience.

• C Some fans even copied her parenting style at home.

• D These concerns only increased as her content gained more attention.

7. 7. The pronoun in sentence 11 is unclear. Which word should replace someone to create a more effective sentence?

• A an adult

• B them

• C someone nearby

• D a neighbor

8. 8. Which sentence is extraneous and should be deleted from the third paragraph (sentences 10–14)?

• A Sentence 10

• B Sentence 11

• C Sentence 13

• D Sentence 14

9. 9. What is the most effective way to combine sentences 1 and 2?

• A When a popular parenting influencer, serious allegations, and a social media platform collide, it creates a disturbing case.

• B A popular parenting influencer, serious allegations, and a social media platform make for a disturbing result.

• C When a popular parenting influencer, serious allegations, and a social media platform collide,

• D What happens when a popular parenting influencer, serious allegations, and a social media platform collide? The outcome is a story that reveals the dangers of fame and the importance of protecting children.

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1. 10. Monica would like to add the following detail to the fourth paragraph (sentences 15–17): Many people were shocked that such treatment had gone unnoticed for so long. Where should this sentence be placed?

• A Before sentence 15

• B After sentence 15

• C After sentence 16

• D After sentence 17