March Madness Revise & Edit

Which change should be made to sentence 5?

• Change for to four

• Change phenomenon to fenomenon

• Change legandary to legendary

• No change is needed

What change if any should be made to sentence 1?

• Add a period

• Add a question mark

• Add a comma

• No change is needed

What correction needs to be made to sentence 1?

• Capitalize Tournament

• Capitalize Basketball

• Capitalize United States

• No change is needed

What is the best way to combine sentences 3 and 4?

• The tournament's nickname is “March Madness,” but it reflects the intense excitement and unpredictability that characterize the games.

• The tournament's nickname is “March Madness,” since it reflects the intense excitement and unpredictability that characterize the games.

• The tournament's nickname is “March Madness,” however it reflects the intense excitement and unpredictability that characterize the games

• The tournament's nickname is “March Madness,” although it reflects the intense excitement and unpredictability that characterize the games.

What change should be made to sentence 7?

• Change watchers to spectators

• Change watchers to others

• Change watchers to students

• No Change is needed

What sentence should be deleted from the paragraph?

• Sentence 1

• Sentence 2

• Sentence 6

• Sentence 7

What change should be made to sentence 1?

• Change its to his

• Change its to our

• Change its to their

• Make no change

Which change should be made to sentence 7?

• Add “intense” before competition

• Add “severe” before competition

• Add “forceful” before competition

• Add “friendly” before competition

What change if any should be made to the beginning of sentence 5?

• Change are to is

• Change are to am

• Change are to has

• No Change is needed

Where is the best place to add this sentence?

The format of the game causes the tournament’s intensity to heighten as each team faces the risk of elimination after a single loss.

• After sentence 2

• After sentence 5

• After sentence 6

• After sentence 7