Editing Review #2

What change should be made in sentence 2?

• Change helped to help

• Change without to with out

• Delete the comma after words

• Change she to her

What change should be made in sentence 3?

• A) Similar to concealing your greens beneath your mashed potatoes. A short paragraph employs tricks to bypass undesirable content.

• B) Similar to concealing your greens beneath your mashed potatoes; a short paragraph employs tricks to bypass undesirable content.

• C) Similar to concealing your greens beneath your mashed potatoes, a short paragraph employs tricks to bypass undesirable content.

What change should be made in sentence 2?

• Delete the comma after approaching

• Change to share to sharing

• Insert a comma after participate

• Change Summer Program to summer program

What change is needed in sentence 7?

• Change for to of

• Insert a comma after time

• Change the comma after consideration to a semicolon

• Change anticipate to anticipating

What is the correct way to write sentence 3?

• Despite their odd appearance, these little creatures may be the key to medical breakthroughs!

• Despite their odd appearance. These little creatures may be the key to medical breakthroughs!

• Despite their odd appearance; these little creatures may be the key, to medical breakthroughs!

How should sentence 6 be changed?

• Change are to were

• Delete the comma after axolotls

• Change of to for

• Change unlocking to unlock

What change should be made in sentence 1?

• Change middle school to Middle School

• Delete the comma after student

• Change we to you

• Change is to are

How should sentence 4 be changed?

• Change don’t to didn’t

• Change the semicolon to a comma

• Change however to likewise

• Change prioratize to prioritize

What is the correct way to write sentence 1?

• Despite graduating from school years ago. Juan still cherishes his football jersey and wears it consistently, whether for trips to the gym or daily chores.

• Despite graduating from school years ago, Juan still cherishes his football jersey and wears it consistently, whether for trips to the gym or daily chores.

• Despite graduating from school years ago Juan still cherishes his football jersey and wears it consistently. Whether for trips to the gym or daily chores.

• Despite graduating from school years ago Juan still cherishes his football jersey and wears it consistently, whether for trips to the gym or daily chores.

What change should be made in sentence 2?

• Change Juans to Juan’s

• Change has made to make

• Change some to more

• Change an to a