Jungle Close-Ups Editing Practice

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 3?

• Insert a comma after them

• Delete and

• Change places too dense to places to dense

• No change should be made.

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 7?

• Change wasn’t having to weren’t having

• Change much luck to no luck

• Insert a comma after luck

• No change should be made.

What change should be made to sentence 8?

• Change while watching to he was watching

• Delete the comma after campsite

• Change has to had

• Change idea to ideal

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 15?

• Insert a comma after cameras

• Change hooked to hooking

• Change elephant tusks to elephants’ tusks

• No change is needed.

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 17?

• Change wondered to wandered

• Change wheather to whether

• Change clear to clearer

• No change needs to be made.

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 19?

• Change were to was

• Change impressive to impresive

• Change comma to a semicolon

• Change realistic to realism

What is the correct way to write sentence 22?

• Curious monkeys reached out for the tusk-cams. Deer standing still and allowing the cameras to film them.

• Curious monkeys reached out for the tusk-cams, deer stood still and allowed the cameras to film them.

• Curious monkeys reached out for the tusk-cams. While deer stood still and allowed the cameras to film them.

• While curious monkeys reached out for the tusk-cams, deer stood still and allowed the cameras to film them.