Editing and Revising Tips

Proofread your work. Choose other tips you can do during this stage.

• Make sure you ask friend for proof reading your work.

• Make sure you ask friends for his additional ideas.

• Make sure you have complete sentences, correct spelling and punctuations.

• Think of an interesting title.

• Re read to see if each sentence makes sense.

What do you do during Revising? Check the correct answers.

• Use quotes or add dialogues.

• Include descriptive words.

• Write your ideas in order.

• Use a list or web to organise your ideas.

• Add details to develop important parts.

What change, if any, should be made to the following sentence? One day, Tom n., my classmate brought a drone to school.

• Change Tom n. to Tom N.

• Change brought to brung

• Change a to an

• No change needs to be made

Answer explanation

Proper nouns should be capitalized. First names and last names begin with a capital letter.

Tags

CCSS.L.2.2C

What change, if any, should be made to the following sentence? The house was made out of brick and I wondered how brick could twist like that.

• Change made to maid

• Insert a comma after brick

• Insert a comma after and

• No change needs to be made in sentence 10

Tags

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

When you have finished your rough draft, what 4 things should you make sure to check?

• It looks good enough so I'm done.

• capitalization, animal crackers, starbursts, and peanuts

• I don't want to.

• capitalization, indentions, punctuation, and spelling.

Tags

CCSS.L.4.2A

CCSS.L.3.2A

CCSS.L.2.2A

CCSS.L.1.2A

CCSS.L.K.2A

What DON'T you do when you edit?

• Add new ideas

• Fix the grammar

• Fix Spelling Mistakes

• Add punctuations

Tags

CCSS.RI.4.3

CCSS.RI.4.5

CCSS.RI.5.5

CCSS.RI.3.5

CCSS.RI.3.3

What change, if any, should be made to the following sentence? With our parent's assistence, each student was allowed to throw the flaming ball.

• Change parent's to parents

• Change assistence to assistance

• Change was to were

• No change needs to be made

Tags

CCSS.L.3.2D

CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.1.1B

What change, if any, should be made to the following sentence? My collection of football cards are made up of different players and teams.

• Change cards to card's

• Insert a comma after boomerangs

• Change are to is

• No change needs to be made

Answer explanation

The subject of this sentence is "collection". The word "collection" is a singular noun and needs to have a singular noun which is the word "is" and not "are".

Tags

CCSS.L.5.2A

CCSS.L.7.2A

CCSS.L.1.2C

Mrs. Watson said that our class would go on a field trip on March, 2 2015.

• Delete the comma after March and insert it after 2

• Add quotatiion marks before our and after 2015.

• Delete the comma after March

• The sentence is correct.

Tags

CCSS.L.4.2B

CCSS.L.3.2C

CCSS.L.5.2D

The Pledge of Allegiance is an important part of our monday morning assembly.

• ^{Change important to more important}

• Change an to a

• ^{Change monday to Monday}

• The sentence is correct

Tags

CCSS.L.3.2D

CCSS.L.2.2C

CCSS.L.1.1B