Revising and Editing

If a writer deletes a source from the Works Cited page because it was not used in the research essay or project, he/she is ______.

• Revising

• Editing

If a writer checks that all words in a direct quote are written word-for-word, he/she is _____

• Revising

• Editing

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 3?

• Insert a comma after them

• Delete and

• Change places too dense to places to dense

• No change should be made.

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 7?

• A Change wasn’t having to weren’t having

• B Change much luck to no luck

• C Insert a comma after luck

• D Make no change

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 15?

• Insert a comma after cameras

• Change hooked to hooking

• Change elephants tusks to elephants’ tusks

• No change is needed.

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 17?

• Change wondered to wandered

• Change wheather to whether

• Change clear to clearer

• No change needs to be made.

What change needs to be made in sentence 19?

• Change were to was

• Change impressive to impresive

• Change the comma to a semicolon

• Change realistic to realism

What is the correct way to write sentence 22?

• A Curious monkeys reached out for the tusk-cams. Deer standing still and allowing the cameras to film them.

• B Curious monkeys reached out for the tusk-cams, deer stood still and allowed the cameras to film them.

• C Curious monkeys reached out for the tusk-cams. While deer stood still and allowed the cameras to film them.

• D Curious monkeys reached out for the tusk-cams, while deer stood still and allowed the cameras to film them.

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 25?

• Change the comma after added to a period

• Change It to it

• Change world to World

• No change should be made in sentence 25.

Firstly, there is a lack of evidence that HW actually helps students. 4th grade students got similar scores to those who did no HW. Homework can cause physical and emotional fatigue. What needs to be changed in this paragraph?

• The evidence doesn't match the reason/topic sentence.

• The elaboration doesn't match the evidence or the reason/topic sentence.

• The reason doesn't match the evidence and elaboration.

• It's correct.