Writing Revision

What is the best change we can make to this sentence: 
The girl said, "Lets walk to the store and buy Takis from there."

• Change Lets to Let's

• Change there to their

• Remove the comma after said

• Change Takis to takis

What is the best change we can make to this sentence:
"But mom, I can't clean my room, I'm busy on Snapchat," the girl exclaimed.

• Change can't to cant

• Change Snapchat to snapchat

• Remove the comma after room

• Change mom to Mom

What is the best change we can make to this sentence: 
"First you do your homework, than you can play on your phone," the exasperated mother replied.

• Change than to then

• Change your to you're

• Change mother to Mother

• Change replied to replyed

How would you combine the following sentences without changing the meaning? 
My cat escaped out the door.
I had to rescue it from a tree.
I was late for school.

• I rescued my cat from a tree because it was escaped out the door.

• I was late for school after my cat escaped out of the door.

• After my cat escaped out the door, I had to rescue it from a tree and was then late for school.

• My cat escaped out the door and I had to rescue it from a tree and I was late for school.

Where should the commas go?
The deer head up ears alert listened for danger.

• The deer, head up, ears alert, listened for danger.

• The deer, head up ears alert, listened for danger.

• The deer head up ears alert, listened for danger.

• The deer head, up ears alert, listened for danger.

What changes do you need to make to the sentence below?
" Hi, martha! how are you"

• lowercase H

• period  after the word you

• capital m, h, and ? after you

• no changes need to be made

What change, if any, should be made to the sentence?
Patrick and Ariel broke Ms. Ward's vase, and now there in hot water!  

• Change Ward's to Ward

• Remove the comma after vase

• Change there to their

• Change their to they're
  

What change, if any, should be made?
Mom told me to cut a apple for little Suzie, but instead I peeled her a banana.

• Change peeled to pelt

• Change but to because

• Change banana to bannana

• Change a to an

Which change, if any, should be made to the sentence?
There were five baby puppys asleep on the pillow.

• Change puppys to puppies

• Change puppys to puppy's

• Change There to Their 

• Change There to They're

Which sentence uses commas correctly?

• Since I was absent on Tuesday, I have a lot of make-up work to do. 

• Since, I was absent on Tuesday I have a lot of make-up work to do. 

• Since I was absent, on Tuesday, I have a lot of make-up work to do. 

• Since I was absent on Tuesday, I have a lot, of make-up work to do.