Edit the Sentence

The dessert has hot sand, cactus, and rocks everywhere. 
What change, if any, needs to be made to this sentence?

• delete the comma after cactus

• change everywhere to every  where

• change dessert to desert

• make no change

The teacher was helpfull and showed the student how to work the difficult math problem. 
What change, if any, is needed in the sentence above?

• add a comma before and 

• change helpfull to helpful

• insert a comma after difficult

• no change is needed

Me and my brother went over there because they had lots of different board games to play! 
What change, if any, is needed in the sentence above?

• Change me and my brother to my brother and I

• change lots to lot's

• change there to their

• no change is needed

What is the correct way to write the sentence above?

• 20 million people visit Disney World almost each year. 

• Almost 20 million people visit Disney World each year. 

• 20 million people visit Disney World each year, almost. 

• No change is needed

the little girl was quite excited to go shopping at the mall with her grandmother. 
What change, if any, is needed in the sentence above?

• change the to The

• change quite to quiet

• change grandmother to Grandmother

• no change is needed

We picked Max up. At the guide dog school early in the morning. Max came with his own suitcase. That was my first surprise. It held a toy, some treats, and a special brush. What is the correct way to write sentences 7 and 8?

• We picked Max up at the guide dog school early. In the morning.

• We picked Max up at the guide dog school early in the morning.

• We picked. Max up at the guide dog school early in the morning.

• Sentences 7 and 8 should not be changed.

My third surprise was that Max liked me after all. That evening, I gave Landon a good night hug. Then I patted Max’s head. He licked my hand. And wagged his tail. What is the correct way to write sentences 19 and 20?

• He licked my hand and wagged his tail.

• He licked. My hand and wagged his tail.

• He licked my hand and wagged. His tail.

• Sentences 14 and 15 should not be changed.

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 16?

• Change I’m to Im

• Change have to has

• Insert a comma after news

• Sentence 16 should not be changed.

How should sentence 2 be changed?

• Change picnic to picnics

• Change sandwichs to sandwiches

• Change exploring to explores

• The sentence should not be changed.

The cat chased the mouse through the house, but it got away.

• A) Change it to they

• B) Change chased to chases

• C) Change house to houses

• D) No change is needed