Revising or Editing

How should this sentence be punctuated?
Not sure, Dad replied, you'd have to ask mom.

• "Not sure." Dad replied. "You'd have to ask mom."

• "Not sure," Dad replied, "you'd have to ask mom."

What change should be made in this sentence?
Darion took his test, and he makes a good grade.

• Change good to well

• Change makes to maked

• Change makes to made

• Make no change

Where should a comma be inserted?
Hey look at that bird.

• After Hey

• After look

• No comma needed

What change should be made in the following sentence?
Each student needs to bring their computer to class tomorrow.

• Change' to' to 'too'

• Change 'their' to 'there'

• Change 'their' to 'his or her'

• No change

Which words need to be capitalized in this sentence?
mom, I need to go to the grocery store to get some gatorade.

• Mom

• Gatorade

• Grocery Store

• Mom and Gatorade

Is this sentence punctuated correctly: After we rode our bikes to the park we played basketball baseball and kickball.

• Yes

• No

What is the best combination of the two sentences?

• She wanted to go to prom and she never asked for permission.

• She wanted to go to prom; never asked for permission

• She wanted to go to prom but she never asked for permission.

• Although she wanted to go to prom, she never asked for permission.

Which of the following sentences is correctly punctuated?

• In the middle of night. The van pulled up.

• Chuck would not, give Jane the seat.

• Over coffee and toast, Kelly told me about her new job.

• Lemonade. My favorite drink.

The following sentence pair should be combined to make a better sentence. Which is the best revision? 
The bicycle tire is flat. The bicycle tire is on the bike. 

• The bicycle tire is on the bike and the bicycle tire is flat.

• The flat bicycle tire is on the bike.

• On the bike, the bicycle tire there is flat.

• The tire on the bicycle is flat.

Which sentence is correctly revised for clarity? 'The book was read by the girl in one day.'

• The girl read the book in one day.

• The book was read in one day by the girl.

• In one day, the book was read by the girl.

• The girl, in one day, read the book.