Writing Feedback

What's wrong with this sentence? We need to build more roads, bridges, trains, buses, highways, hire more police, stop people driving so much.

• There's nothing wrong with it.

• It doesn't mention enough solutions.

• It's a long list, and none of the points are explained.

• It's too short.

Tags

CCSS.L.4.1F

What should go at the start of a paragraph?

• A clear topic sentence, explaining the idea of the paragraph.

• An example.

• Supporting sentences, explaining the main idea.

• Solutions.

Tags

CCSS.RI. 9-10.2

CCSS.RI.11-12.2

CCSS.RL.11-12.2

CCSS.RL.8.2

CCSS.RL.9-10.2

What should go in the middle of a paragraph?

• A clear topic sentence, explaining the idea of the paragraph.

• An example.

• Supporting sentences, explaining the main idea.

• Solutions.

Tags

CCSS.RI. 9-10.2

CCSS.RI.11-12.2

CCSS.RL.11-12.2

CCSS.RL.8.2

CCSS.RL.9-10.2

What should go at the end of a body paragraph?

• A clear topic sentence, explaining the idea of the paragraph.

• An example.

• Supporting sentences, explaining the main idea.

• Solutions.

Tags

CCSS.RI. 9-10.2

CCSS.RI.11-12.2

CCSS.RI.8.2

CCSS.RL.11-12.2

CCSS.RL.9-10.2

How many paragraphs should you write?

• 1

• 2

• 3

• 4

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CCSS.RI.11-12.3

CCSS.RI.11-12.5

CCSS.RI.8.5

CCSS.RI.9-10.3

CCSS.RI.9-10.5

Why are this words incorrectly used together?

¨Firstly, people’s... Additionally, ignoring food…Finally, people’s …"

• You cannot start a sentence with adverbs.

• They are not parallel.

• They are informal.

Tags

CCSS.L.9-10.1A

How can you correct this sentence?

"Eat healthy food is not easy for everybody; however, we should all try to do it."

• Eating healthy food is...

• When eat healthy food is...

• People eat healthy food is...

Tags

CCSS.L.8.1A

Why is this sentence "weak"?

It is good to have a healthy lifestyle.

• The use of "It is"

• The use of "good"

• The verb chosen

• The order of the adjective and final noun

Tags

CCSS.L.3.1A

Which of the next examples is an appropriate topic sentence?

• It is good to have a healthy lifestyle.

• Having a healthy lifestyle is challenging for some people.

• Having a healthy lifestyle requires people to eat well, exercise and sleep enough.

Tags

CCSS.RI. 9-10.2

CCSS.RI.11-12.2

CCSS.RL.11-12.2

CCSS.RL.8.2

CCSS.RL.9-10.2

What is the primary purpose of writing feedback?

• To criticize the writer

• To improve the writer's skills

• To rewrite the text

• To publish the text