What is the BEST way to revise this sentence?
STAAR Revision Practice

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English
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7th Grade
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Hard
Sarah Williams
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25 questions
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1.
MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION
1 min • 1 pt
A shrill scream from the car behind me snaps me out of my daydream and returns my focus to the world around me.
A shrill scream from the car behind me, returning my focus to the world around me.
2.
MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION
1 min • 1 pt
What is the BEST revision to make to this sentence?
All I can hear is the whoosh of the wind, the thunder of the car's
metallic wheels, and the piercing shrieks of my fellow
passengers.
All I can hear is the whoosh of the wind and the thunder of the
car's metallic wheels, I can also hear my fellow
passengers who have piercing shrieks.
3.
MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION
1 min • 1 pt
What is the most effective revision to make to this sentence?
They write essays, take tests, and do homework, they also go to
sports practices.
They write essays, take tests, do homework, and attend sports
practices.
4.
MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION
1 min • 5 pts
What is the MOST effective revision to make in sentence 23?
In a panic I ransacked our recycle bin, pulling out brown cardboard boxes, paper towel tubes, and paper scraps that I hastily glued together.
In a panic I ransacked our recycle bin, pulling out brown cardboard boxes, paper towel tubes, and there were paper scraps that I hastily and quickly glued together.
In a panic I ransacked our recycle bin, hastily and quickly gluing together what I pulled out, which was brown cardboard boxes, paper towel tubes, and paper scraps.
In a panic I ransacked our recycle bin, pulling out and removing brown cardboard boxes, paper towel tubes, and paper scraps for hastily gluing together.
5.
MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION
1 min • 1 pt
What is the most effective revision to make in the sentence?
Looking for her dog, the young girl went into the shelter.
She looked for her dog, she went into the shelter.
Looking for her dog was when she went into the shelter.
No revision needed in the sentence.
6.
MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION
1 min • 1 pt
What is the BEST way to revise sentence 15?
The animals at the sanctuary were comforted when Jasmine’s loving presence and gentle care comforted them.
The animals at the sanctuary were comforted by Jasmine’s loving presence and gentle care.
The animals at the sanctuary were comforted by Jasmine, who had her loving presence and her gentle care.
The animals at the sanctuary were comforted by Jasmine, her loving presence, and her gentle care.
7.
MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION
1 min • 1 pt
Which of the following is the best revision for the following sentence? The man said that he felt good and would go back to work.
The injured man said that he felt good and would think about working later.
The severly injured man said that he felt he was beginning to regain his strength and that he was looking foward to returning to work with his friends.
The sick man said that he felt ok and he might work again later.
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