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Which sentence uses commas correctly?

• Since I was absent on Tuesday, I have a lot of make-up work to do.

• Since, I was absent on Tuesday I have a lot of make-up work to do.

• Since I was absent, on Tuesday, I have a lot of make-up work to do.

• Since I was absent on Tuesday, I have a lot, of make-up work to do.

Jenny and Haley walked there dogs together for two hours. The dogs slept very well that night.

What transition could be added to the beginning of sentence 6 to make it clearer?

• However,

• Therefore,

• In order to,

• Finally,

Last month, my entire family went to watch the super bowl in Houston.

• Delete the comma after "month"

• Change "super bowl" to "Super Bowl"

• Insert a comma after "super bowl"

• Make no change

When you have finished your rough draft, what 4 things should you make sure to check?

• It looks good enough so I'm done.

• capitalization, animal crackers, starbursts, and peanuts

• I don't want to.

• capitalization, indentions, punctuation, and spelling.

Choose the option that best revises the following sentence for clarity: "He delivered the performance, which was both powerful and moving, with great skill."

• He skillfully delivered a powerful and moving performance.

• The performance, which he delivered, was powerful, moving, and done with great skill.

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DOK Level 2: Skill/Concept

What change, if any, should be made in the sentence?

• Change your to you’re

• Insert a comma after early

• Change recieve to receive

• No change should be made.

What change, if any, needs to be made in the sentence?

• Change then to than

• Change nourishment to norishment

• Change discovered to discover

• No change needs to be made in the sentence

In this step, you read over your writing & make change to improve what you have written.

• Brainstorm

• Draft

• Revise/Edit

• Publish

Which sentence uses commas correctly?

• A) The book, which was on the table, was very interesting.

• B) The book which was on the table, was very interesting.

• C) The book, which was on the table was very interesting.

• D) The book which, was on the table was very interesting.

What is the correct form of the verb in the sentence: "She ___ to the store every Saturday."

• A) go

• B) goes

• C) going

• D) gone