Revision

During the revision process, asking for feedback from peers and adults can help you:

• Finish writing faster.

• Identify areas of improvement.

• Increase the word count.

• Choose better fonts.

Revision questions are likely to include questions about:

• clearly and effectively communication ideas

• specific grammar and mechanics rules

• punctuation, spelling, and correct parts of speech

• your Bitmoji's outfit changes

Active voice: Shakespeare wrote many plays during the 16th and 17th century. Passive voice: Many plays _______ during the 16th and 17th century.

Direct speech:

"I'm going to talk to her."

Reported speech:

She said that...

We use the past simple to talk about actions that started and finished in the past.

• True

• False

She _________ when her mom came in and started talking.

• had been studying

• was studying

• studied

• had studied

During the revision process, which of the following is most important for improving clarity?

• A) Adding more adjectives

• B) Using complex sentences

• C) Simplifying language

• D) Including more examples

Which of the following is a key aspect of revising a written piece?

• A) Checking for spelling errors

• B) Adding more content

• C) Changing the font style

• D) Printing the document

In the context of revision, what does 'coherence' refer to?

• A) The length of the essay

• B) The logical flow of ideas

• C) The number of paragraphs

• D) The use of complex vocabulary

Which sentence is correctly revised for passive voice? Original: 'The committee approved the new policy.'

• A) The new policy was approved by the committee.

• B) The committee was approved by the new policy.

• C) The new policy approves the committee.

• D) Approved was the new policy by the committee.