Editing STAAR

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 6?

• Change Pepper’s to Peppers

• Change feet to foot

• Change came to come

• No change is needed.

What is the correct way to write sentence 2?

• I did not think a field trip to an outdoor museum would be interesting or I was wrong.

• I did not think a field trip to an outdoor museum would be interesting, since I was wrong.

• I did not think a field trip to an outdoor museum would be interesting because I was wrong.

• I did not think a field trip to an outdoor museum would be interesting, but I was wrong.

What change should be made in sentence 7?

• Change asked to asks

• Change picture to pictures

• Change favorit to favorite

• Change arrived to arrive

What change should be made in sentence 6?

• Change However to Meanwhile

• Change believed to believe

• Change usefuller to more useful

• Change than to then

What change should be made in sentence 8?

• Change Even to Evan

• Change french to French

• Change of to with

• Change book to books

What change should be made in sentence 4?

• Change finded to found

• Change would be to had been

• Change his to their

• Change favorite to more favorite

What change should be made in sentence 6?

• Change Suddenly to Sudden

• Change had tohave

• Change bright to brightly

• Change ideas to idea

What is the BEST way to combine sentences 11 and 12?

• Today the Acton Children’s Business Fair is much larger than the first fair, so it still has the same goal.

• Today the Acton Children’s Business Fair is much larger than the first fair, it still has the same goal.

• Today the Acton Children’s Business Fair is much larger than the first fair, but it still has the same goal.

• Today the Acton Children’s Business Fair is much larger than the first fair, or it still has the same goal.

Which transition should be added to the beginning of sentence 25?

• Fortunately

• Then

• Certainly

• Now

Which sentence should Julie add after sentence 27 to improve the conclusion of her paper?

• Every year more children participate in the fair.

• The Acton Children’s Business Fair might lead to more products designed by children in stores.

• It is amazing what children can do when adults support them.

• The Acton Children’s Business Fairs help prepare the future business leaders of tomorrow.