The Benefits of Martial Arts

Which of the following sentences should replace sentence 13 to serve as a more effective topic sentence for this paragraph?

• In martial arts class, the instruction goes beyond learning how to perform physical moves more effectively. 

• Many people are surprised by the variety of benefits that they receive from taking a martial arts class. 

• As if the physical benefits weren’t enough, participating in martial arts also helps kids develop strong mental focus. 

•  Taking a martial arts class will certainly help someone get in better shape physically, but that’s not the only benefit. 

Which of the following sentences should replace sentence 13 to serve as a more effective topic sentence of this paragraph?

• As if the physical benefits weren’t enough, participating in martial arts also helps kids develop strong mental focus.

• In martial arts class, the instruction goes beyond learning how to perform physical moves more effectively.

• Many people are surprised by the variety of benefits that they receive from taking a martial arts class.

• Taking a martial arts class will certainly help someone get in better shape physically, but that’s not the only benefit.

Which sentence should Rose add after sentence 31 to improve the conclusion of her letter?

• Why do you think these classes are so popular?

• Are there any other benefits you want to know about?

• Do you see why it’s better for you than using a computer?

• Why not put down your phone, try a class, and see for yourself?

Which Sentence In The Fifth Paragraph (sentences 24–28) is extraneous and should be deleted?

• Sentence 25

• Sentence 26

• Sentence 27

• Sentence 28

Martial arts are not limited to physical benefits but also have a positive ___ on mental well- being

• advantage

• impact

• effort

They are not just about fighting but also about ___, respect, and personal growth.

• learning

• argument

• discipline

Which sentence should replace sentence 5 to provide a more effective claim at the end of the introductory paragraph? Dear Students, It’s no secret that kids our age enjoy spending time on a computer or a cell phone. (2) Health experts tell us that we need to exercise for at least an hour a day, but tearing ourselves away from our electronic devices can be hard. (3) Playing a team sport is one way to get this exercise, but not every kid wants to join a team. (4) For anyone who wants a fun, healthy way to exercise at his or her own pace, I have a suggestion: take a martial-arts class! (5) It’s truly a great way to get in shape and learn.

• Learning and practicing self-defense can help improve your physical fitness, mental focus, self-discipline, and social skills.

• You might find that learning and practicing self-defense is more fun and rewarding than spending time using electronic devices.

• Health experts would probably agree that learning and practicing self-defense is a great way to get in shape and learn new skills.

• When you are learning and practicing self-defense, an hour a day does not seem like a lot of time to spend exercising.

Which transition is the BEST transition to add at the beginning of sentence 16?

• Additionally

• As a result

• Later

• In other words

Rose wants to add another detail to help support the ideas in the second paragraph (sentences 6–11). Which sentence should replace sentence 10 to accomplish this goal? (6) I know from experience that studying martial arts can help you improve your physical fitness. (7) I began taking karate at age seven when my parents insisted I get off the couch and “do something.” (8) At first it was difficult for me to complete the kicking, punching, and blocking drills in karate. (9) I practiced every week to get my heart pumping and at striking foam pads with my hands to help improve my technique. (10) My dedication paid off, and I eventually worked my way up to the rank of brown belt. (11) I love feeling healthier and knowing that I can defend myself if necessary.

• There were very few kids my age who attend karate daily.

• My parents were happy that I made so many friends in karate class.

• I did not realize kids my age could earn such high ranks in a martial-arts class.

• I have become stronger, faster, and better coordinated than I was when I first started.

Rose would like to use a more precise word than large in sentence 27. Which word would be a more effective word to use in this sentence? Learning to master martial arts takes effort and dedication, but the benefits are large.

• heavy

• countless

• limited

• grand