Everyday Editing

What change needs to be made in Line 1?

• Change doll to Doll
• Change New York to new york
• Change introduced to introduce
• No change needs to be made in Line 1

What change needs to be made in Line 2?

• Add a comma after produced
• Delete the comma after doll
• Change Barbie to barbie
• Add a comma after Barbie

What is one change that needs to be made in Line 3?

• Change they're to their
• Change they're to there
• Delete the comma after company
• Delete the comma after mattel

What is one change that needs to be made in Line 3?

• Change company to Company
• Change Inc. to inc.
• Change The to the
• Change mattel to Mattel

What is one change that needs to be made in Line 3?

• Add a comma after imagined
• Change handlers to Handlers
• Change could to should
• Change could to would

What change needs to be made in Line 4?

• Add a comma after imagined
• Change handlers to Handlers
• Change year's to years.
• Change could to would

What is one change that needs to be made in Line 5?

• Add a comma after been
• Add a comma after teacher
• Change an to a
• Change new to knew

What is one change that needs to be made in Line 5?

• Add a period after more and change about to About
• Add a comma after more
• Change an to a
• Change new to knew

What is one change that needs to be made in Line 7?

• Change sun to Sun
• Change Handlers to Hander's
• Change Handlers to handlers
• Insert a comma after the

What is one change that needs to be made in Line 7?

• Insert a comma after Handlers
• Change the to The
• Change sun to Sun
• Change sun to son