Lessons Revise and Editing

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• Change hardly to really

• Delete so

• Insert a comma after plants

• No change should be made in this sentence.

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How should sentence 5 be changed?

• Change came to comes

• Change existense to existence

• Change the question mark to an exclamation point

• Sentence 5 should not be changed.

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What is the correct way to write sentences 23 and 24?

• Many of the species that once made their home on Madagascar are now extinct, scientists, however, are still making discoveries.

• Although many of the species that once made their home on Madagascar are now extinct and scientists are still making discoveries.

• Many of the species that once made their home on Madagascar are now extinct, but there are scientists. Who are still making discoveries

• Although many of the species that once made their home on Madagascar are now extinct, scientists are still making discoveries.

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What change, if any, should be made in sentence 30?

• Change deserves to deserved

• Delete the comma

• Change Oasis to oasis

• No change should be made in sentence 30.

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What change, if any, should be made in sentence 2?

• Change environment to enviromen

• Delete the comma

• Change your to you’re

• No change should be made in this sentence.

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What change should be made in sentence 13?

• Delete where

• Insert a comma after class

• Change a lot to alot

• Change means to had meant

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How should sentence 15 be changed?

• Change experiences to experience’s

• Change will help to helped

• Change acomplished to accomplished

• Sentence 15 should not be changed.

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What change should be made in sentence 22?

• Insert a comma after day after day

• Change that to this

• Change am to was

• No change should be made in sentence 22.

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What is the correct way to write sentence 26?

• In closing, I give you this solemn promise. That if you elect me as president of the sophomore class, I’ll give it my all.

• n closing, I give you this solemn promise: if you elect me as president of the sophomore class, I’ll give it my all.

• n closing, to give you this solemn promise: if you elect me as president of the sophomore class, I’ll give it my all.

• Sentence 26 is written correctly in the paper.