College Revising and Editing

I admit that I had enjoyed going to middle school the last 3 years until now.
 
What change should be made in the sentence? 

• Change admit to admitt 
• Change that to it
• Change had enjoyed to have enjoyed 
• Insert a comma after school 

I can have room to work on projects without getting in anyone elses way.

What change should be made in the sentence? 

•  Change I to And
• Change have to had
• Change anyone to no one
• Change elses to else’s

It’s reasons for being there are to balance the beam and prevent disaster.

What change, if any, needs to be made in the sentence? 

• Change It’s to Its 
• Change are to is
• Change balance to balence
• No change needs to be made in this sentence. 

Also, being a tutor means that I’ll actually have to help with my brothers homework.

What change needs to be made in the sentence?

• Change means to meaning
• Change that to this
• Change have to has
• Change brothers to brother’s

A college football player might not notice the first few tackles in a game, but an NFL player can spot it right away!   
What change needs to be made in the sentence? 

• Change college football player to College Football Player
• Delete the comma after game
• Delete but 
• Change it to them

“Take care of him” said Pete’s owner.

What change, if any, needs to be made in the sentence? 

• Insert a comma after him
• Change Pete’s to Petes’
• Insert quotation marks after the period
• No change needs to be made in this sentence 

College grant programs can now help students pursue an education and improve their lifes .

What change, if any, needs to be made in the sentence?

• Insert a comma after students
• Change students to students’
• Change lifes to lives
• No change needs to be made in this sentence 

A person can sense when there is more then the usual amount of danger near.
 
What change, if any, needs to be made in the sentence? 

• Change sense to scents
• Change then to than
• Add a comma after sense
• No change needs to be made in this sentence 

After I had experienced Six Flags, I realized that there’s alot more to do than just riding roller coasters.
 
What change needs to be made in the sentence? 

• Delete the comma after Six Flags
• Change alot to a lot
• Change there’s to theirs
• Change than to then 

This is where the students go to study and where students who are working on projects gotten a chance to collaborate.

What change needs to be made in the sentence? 

• Insert a comma after study
• Change and where to it’s also where
• Change gotten to get 
• Change collaborate to colloborate