Editing Paragraphs

What is the correct way to write sentence 4?

• That’s what I thought getting glasses would be like. And was certain it would be the end of life as I knew it.

• That’s what I thought getting glasses would be like. I was certain it would be the end of life as I knew it.

• That’s what I thought getting glasses would be like. Because I was certain it would be the end of life as I knew it.

• Make no change

How should sentence 7 be changed?

• Change board to bored

• Change the comma to a semicolon

• Change sinked to sank

• Make no change

What change needs to be made in sentence 10?

• Change Mom to mom

• Change the comma to a period

• Change asked to ask

• Make no change

What change should be made in sentence 11?

• Change helped to helps

• Insert something after knew

• Change wasn’t a to wasn’t no

• Change permanant to permanent

What is the correct way to write sentences 13 and 14?

• I was sure that I would look terrible in glasses and that all the kids would tease me.

• I was sure that I would look terrible in glasses all the kids would tease me.

• I was sure of one thing, I would look terrible in glasses, and all the kids would tease me.

• The sentences are written correctly in the paper.

What change, if any, needs to be made in sentence 18?

• Change that to it

• Change ridiculous to ridiculus

• Insert a comma after looked

• No change needs to be made.

How should sentence 31 be changed?

• Delete when

• Delete the comma after day

• Change surprise to suprise

• No change should be made.

What change needs to be made in sentence 33?

• Change said to say

• Insert a period after glasses

• Change Wow to wow

• Insert quotation marks after the exclamation point

What change should be made in sentence 35?

• Change couldn’t to could’nt

• Delete hardly

• Change believe to beleive

• No change should be made in sentence 35.