STAAR Writing Review

Which is the best written sentence?

• Maggie would sit and she listened to the sound of the waves when she missed her best friend by the shore.

• When Maggie missed her best friend, she would sit by the shore she would listen to the sound of the waves.

• Maggie would sit, and she would listen to the sound of the waves by the shore when she missed her best friend.

• When Maggie missed her best friend, she would sit by the shore and listen to the sound of the waves.

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CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.5.1E

CCSS.L.7.1B

Which is the best written sentence?

• Maggie loved to visit with Captain Frank while he was a grizzled old sailor whose creaking joints had forced him to retire from a life at sea.

• Maggie loved to visit with Captain Frank, a grizzled old sailor whose creaking joints had forced him to retire from a life at sea.

• Maggie loved to visit with Captain Frank and a grizzled old sailor whose creaking joints had forced him to retire from a life at sea.

• Maggie loved to visit with Captain Frank, he was a grizzled old sailor whose creaking joints had forced him to retire from a life at sea.

Tags

CCSS.L.11-12.3A

CCSS.L.7.1C

Which of the following could replace the transition, "however," in a sentence?

• as a matter of fact

• for example

• to conclude

• in contrast

Tags

CCSS.L.1.1G

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.5.1A

CCSS.L.5.1E

Which is the best written sentence?

• What is certain, though, is that animals that do sleep have found some clever ways to do so and unique.

• What is certain, though, is that animals that do sleep have found some clever ways to do so, they are also unique.

• What is certain, though, is that animals have found some clever ways to sleep that are unique ways, too.

• What is certain, though, is that animals that do sleep have found some clever and unique ways to do so.

Tags

CCSS.L.4.1F

How does the sentence below need to be changed?

I admit that I had enjoyed sharing a room with my little brother for the last six years.

• Change admit to admitt

• Change that to it

• Change had enjoyed to have enjoyed

• Insert a comma after brother

Tags

CCSS.L.3.2C

CCSS.L.4.2B

CCSS.L.6.3A

What is the best way to edit the sentence below?

Now that Jamal and I are both getting older, I fell that I’m ready for more privacy and a space of my own.

• Change Jamal and I to Jamal and me

• Delete the comma

• Change fell to feel

• Change privacy to privicy

Tags

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

What is the best way to edit the sentence below?

I need a place to spread out my materials and work on projects without getting in anyone elses way.

• Change I to And

• Change spread to spred

• Change anyone to no one

• Change elses to else’s

Tags

CCSS.L.1.1B

CCSS.L.2.2C

CCSS.L.3.2D

What is the best way to edit the sentence below?

Mr. Phillips, my Band Director, insists that I practice every night.

• Change Band Director to band director

• Delete the second comma

• Change insists to insist

• Delete the first comma

Tags

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

What is the best way to edit the sentence below?

In a room of my own, I could play my trumpet without disturbing the rest of the family, and in time I would be a much better musican.

• Change the comma after "own," to a period

• Change disturbing to disterbing

• Delete "and"

• Change musican to musician

Tags

CCSS.L.4.1F

What is the best way to edit the sentence below?

It’s not really fair to make my brother leave all the time, it’s his room, too.

• Change fair to fare

• Change his to their

• Change the comma to a semicolon

• Change too to two

Tags

CCSS.L.9-10.2A