What is the best way to edit the sentence below? Mr. Phillips, my Band Director, insists that I practice every night.

Change Band Director to band director

What is the best way to edit the sentence below? In a room of my own, I could play my trumpet without disturbing the rest of the family, and in time I would be a much better musican.

Change the comma after "own," to a period

Change disturbing to disterbing

What is the best way to edit the sentence below? It’s not really fair to make my brother leave all the time, it’s his room, too.

Change the comma to a semicolon

What is the best way to edit the sentence below? Because of it's location, I would be able to study in my room and play my trumpet at night without bothering Jamal.

Change without bothering to without never bothering

Which sentence is written correctly?

So in the best interest of my studies, my music, and my social life, I respectfully request that you let me have my own room.

It’s in the best interest of my studies, my music, and my social life, therefore, I respectfully request that you let me have my own room.

It’s in the best interest of my studies, my music, and my social life, so I respectfully request. That you let me have my own room.

So in the best interest of my studies, my music, and my social life. I respectfully request that you let me have my own room.

How does the sentence below need to be changed? As I shuffled through packet’s of information about babysitting, first aid, and music courses, I came across something that stood out.

Change the comma after "courses" to a period

The sentence is correct as written.

What change should be made in the sentence below? I signed up for the program, and by the time it was over, I had not only experienced an adventure, but had also learned that there’s a lot more to working at a zoo then just feeding animals.

Change experienced to expereinced

How should the sentence below be changed? Educating kids and adults are one of the most important things these animal caregivers do.

The sentence is written correctly as is.

Which sentence is written correctly?

Each week, I got to shadow different zoo workers as they took care of their assigned animals.

Each week, I got to shadow different zoo workers. Who would be taking care of their assigned animals.

Each week, getting to shadow different zoo workers. They would be taking care of their assigned animals.

Each week, I got to shadow different zoo workers, they would be taking care of their assigned animals.

What change should be made in the sentence below? Although the animals were different, the daily tasks of each zookeeper were surprisingly simular.

Change were surprisingly to was surprisingly

What change should be made to the sentence below? The animal nursery and hospital is where the baby animals go to grow and where hurt animals gotten a chance to rest and heal.

Change and where to it’s also where

What change, if any, should be made to the sentence below: The thought of putting something into my eye gave me the creep’s.

The sentence is written correctly as is.

What is the correct way to write the two sentences below? Finally, after having to repair my broken glasses following a particularly rough basketball game. I agreed to give contact lenses a try.

Finally, after having to repair my broken glasses following a particularly rough basketball game, I agreed to give contact lenses a try.

Finally, when I had to repair my broken glasses following a particularly rough basketball game is when I agreed. To give contact lenses a try.

Finally, I had to repair my broken glasses following a particularly rough basketball game, then I agreed to give contact lenses a try.

Finally, after having to repair my broken glasses following a particularly rough basketball game. I agreed to give contact lenses a try.

What change needs to be made in the first sentence of the paragraph below? We returned to the optometrist’s office, and within an hour I had took those contacts out and put them back in three times. It wasn’t easy, but I was determined. I really wanted to wear contact lenses!

Change We returned to Returning

Change optometrist's to optometrists

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MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

2 mins • 1 pt

Which is the best written sentence?

Maggie would sit and she listened to the sound of the waves when she missed her best friend by the shore.

When Maggie missed her best friend, she would sit by the shore she would listen to the sound of the waves.

Maggie would sit, and she would listen to the sound of the waves by the shore when she missed her best friend.

When Maggie missed her best friend, she would sit by the shore and listen to the sound of the waves.

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CCSS.L.5.1E

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.7.1B

CCSS.L.2.1F

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

2 mins • 1 pt

Which is the best written sentence?

Maggie loved to visit with Captain Frank while he was a grizzled old sailor whose creaking joints had forced him to retire from a life at sea.

Maggie loved to visit with Captain Frank, a grizzled old sailor whose creaking joints had forced him to retire from a life at sea.

Maggie loved to visit with Captain Frank and a grizzled old sailor whose creaking joints had forced him to retire from a life at sea.

Maggie loved to visit with Captain Frank, he was a grizzled old sailor whose creaking joints had forced him to retire from a life at sea.

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CCSS.L.11-12.3A

CCSS.L.7.1C

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

1 min • 1 pt

Which of the following could replace the transition, "however," in a sentence?

as a matter of fact

for example

to conclude

in contrast

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CCSS.L.5.1E

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.1.1G

CCSS.L.5.1A

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

2 mins • 1 pt

Which is the best written sentence?

What is certain, though, is that animals that do sleep have found some clever ways to do so and unique.

What is certain, though, is that animals that do sleep have found some clever ways to do so, they are also unique.

What is certain, though, is that animals have found some clever ways to sleep that are unique ways, too.

What is certain, though, is that animals that do sleep have found some clever and unique ways to do so.

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CCSS.L.4.1F

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

5 mins • 1 pt

How does the sentence below need to be changed?

I admit that I had enjoyed sharing a room with my little brother for the last six years.

Change admit to admitt

Change that to it

Change had enjoyed to have enjoyed

Insert a comma after brother

Tags

CCSS.L.4.2B

CCSS.L.3.2C

CCSS.L.6.3A

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

5 mins • 1 pt

What is the best way to edit the sentence below?

Now that Jamal and I are both getting older, I fell that I’m ready for more privacy and a space of my own.

Change Jamal and I to Jamal and me

Delete the comma

Change fell to feel

Change privacy to privicy

Tags

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

5 mins • 1 pt

What is the best way to edit the sentence below?

I need a place to spread out my materials and work on projects without getting in anyone elses way.

Change I to And

Change spread to spred

Change anyone to no one

Change elses to else’s

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CCSS.L.1.1B

CCSS.L.2.2C

CCSS.L.3.2D

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STAAR Writing Review

Which is the best written sentence?

Which is the best written sentence?

Which of the following could replace the transition, "however," in a sentence?

Which is the best written sentence?

How does the sentence below need to be changed?I admit that I had enjoyed sharing a room with my little brother for the last six years.

What is the best way to edit the sentence below?Now that Jamal and I are both getting older, I fell that I’m ready for more privacy and a space of my own.

What is the best way to edit the sentence below?I need a place to spread out my materials and work on projects without getting in anyone elses way.

What is the best way to edit the sentence below?Mr. Phillips, my Band Director, insists that I practice every night.

What is the best way to edit the sentence below?In a room of my own, I could play my trumpet without disturbing the rest of the family, and in time I would be a much better musican.

What is the best way to edit the sentence below?It’s not really fair to make my brother leave all the time, it’s his room, too.

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How does the sentence below need to be changed?

I admit that I had enjoyed sharing a room with my little brother for the last six years.

What is the best way to edit the sentence below?

Now that Jamal and I are both getting older, I fell that I’m ready for more privacy and a space of my own.

What is the best way to edit the sentence below?

I need a place to spread out my materials and work on projects without getting in anyone elses way.

What is the best way to edit the sentence below?

Mr. Phillips, my Band Director, insists that I practice every night.

What is the best way to edit the sentence below?

In a room of my own, I could play my trumpet without disturbing the rest of the family, and in time I would be a much better musican.

What is the best way to edit the sentence below?

It’s not really fair to make my brother leave all the time, it’s his room, too.