Revise Writing

The dessert has hot sand, cactus, and rocks everywhere. 
What change, if any, needs to be made to this sentence?

• delete the comma after cactus
• change everywhere to every  where
• change dessert to desert
• make no change

Me and my brother went over there because they had lots of different board games to play! 
What change, if any, is needed in the sentence above?

• Change me and my brother to my brother and I
• change lots to lot's
• change there to their
• no change is needed

20 million people almost visit Disney World each year.
What is the correct way to write the sentence above? 

• 20 million people visit Disney World almost each year. 
• Almost 20 million people visit Disney World each year. 
• 20 million people visit Disney World each year, almost. 
• No change is needed

Taking out words that don't make sense in a sentence happens in the editing phase of the writing process.

• True
• False

The boys (drove/drived) the car down the street. 

• drove
• drived

What a beautiful view (./?/!)

• .
• ?
• !

(They're/Their/There) boots got wet in the rain.

• They'r
• Their
• Ther

Which capital letter is used incorrectly?
The boy's sister, Monica, loved the Pepperoni pizza.

• The
• Monica
• Pepperoni

Revising is when the writer makes sure that the writing _______.

• Has punctuation
• Flows well together
• Uses capital letters
• Is spelled correctl

What does it mean to say that nouns and verbs match?

• They have the same first sound
• They look the same
• They are in the same tense
• They rhyme