Editing Sentences

How does sentence 6 need to be changed?

• Change admit to admitt
• Change that to it
• Change had enjoyed to have enjoyed
• Insert a comma after brother

What change should be made in sentence 8?

• Change Jamal and I to Jamal and me
• Delete the comma
• Change fell to feel
• Change privacy to privicy

What change needs to be made in sentence 12?

• Change I to And
• Change spread to spred
• Change anyone to no one
• Change elses to else's

How does sentence 15 need to be changed?

• Change Band Director to band director
• Delete the second comma
• Change insists to insisting
• Sentence 15 does not need to be changed.

What change should be made in sentence 17?

• Change the comma after own to a period
• Change disturbing to disterbing
• Delete and
• Change musican to musician

What change should be made in sentence 22?

• Change fair to fare
• Change him to them
• Change the comma to a semicolon
• change 'too' to 'to'

What change should be made in sentence 25?

• Change its to it's
• Change the comma to a period
• Change without bothering to without never bothering
• No change should be made in sentence 25.

What is the correct way to rewrite sentences 27 and 28?

• So in the best interest of my studies, my music, and my social life, I respectfully request that you let me have my own room.
• It's in the best interest of my studies, my music, and my social life, therefore, I respectfully request that you let me have my own room.
• It's in the best interest of my studies, my music, and my social life, so I respectfully request.  That you let me have my own room.
• The sentences are written correctly in the passage.