Revising and Editing

Which sentence should be deleted?

• Sentence 15

• Sentence 17

• Sentence 20

• Sentence 21

Which sentence has the BEST sentence structure?

• A

• B

• C

• D

Which is the BEST transition word to help move from sentence 8 to sentence 9?

• Otherwise

• Next

• Besides

• For instance

The antecedent of their is not clear in sentence 18, which word should replace their?

• people's

• farms'

• chemicals'

• exposures'

What is the BEST way to combine sentences 17 and 18?

• The young turtles hatch because they leave the beach.

• Hatching, the beach is left by young turtles.

• After the young turtles hatch, they leave the beach.

• • Either the young turtles hatch, or they leave the beach.

Which is the BEST sentence structure?

• F

• G

• H

• J

The meaning of sentence 14 can be improved by changing stuff to?

• much of it

• a lot

• whatever causes their phobia

• things like that

How should sentence 29 be changed?

• Change donkeys' to donkey's

• Change the comma after again to a semicolon

• Change diffrent to different

• Sentence 29 should not be changed

How should sentence 3 be changed?

• Change occasionally to occaasional

• Change received to recieved

• Insert a comma after trims

• Change keeped to kept

How should sentence 24 be changed?

• Change seriously to serious

• Change they're to there

• Remove the comma after food

• • No change needs to be made in this sentence