Cohesion and Academic Register

The Benefits of Design Thinking Design thinking is a creative approach to solving problems that helps people find innovative solutions. (a)   , ​ (b)   method is often used in business and education to encourage teamwork and new ideas. ​ (c)   , design thinking allows teams to understand the needs of their users by observing and asking questions. ​ (d)   , ​ this can create products or services that solve real problems.​ Moreover ​ , design thinking promotes creativity by encouraging people to test their ideas and learn from mistakes. ​ (e)   , using design thinking can lead to better results and improved collaboration.

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What's the error in this passage?

"Design thinking is awesome because it makes everything easier. It’s such a cool method that everyone loves to use."

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What's the error in this passage?

"Design thinking always leads to successful outcomes. Every team that uses it becomes innovative and productive."

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What's the error in this passage?

"We believe that design thinking is the best approach to solving problems. It helps us come up with creative solutions."

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What's the error in this passage?

"Design thinking doesn’t just solve problems; it’s also fun and exciting. It’s the best method for innovation."

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What's the error in this passage?

"You can use design thinking to fix almost anything. It’s your key to success."

• vague or subjective language (曖昧で主観的な言葉)

• • personal pronouns (一・二人称代名詞)

• • lack of hedging (過度に断定的な表現)

• • rhetorical questions (修辞疑問文)

• • contractions (短縮形)