writing revision

Correct this sentence: The number of unit sold increased from August to September.

• change 'increased' to 'increase'

• add 's' to unit

• change 'sold' to 'sell'

• change 'unit' to 'Avaris'

Correct this sentence: The quantity of units sold fluctuated before decreased in December.

• change 'in' to 'at'

• change 'quantity' to 'number'

• change 'fluctuated' to 'fluctuating'

• change 'decreased' to 'decreasing'

Correct this sentence: The price of units decreased steadily from Sept to Nov, beginning at 140 and ending at 120.

• change 'price' to 'prices'

• change 'price' to 'number'

• change 'beginning' to 'begin'

• remove 'steadily'

Correct this sentence: Internet usage growing steadily in Mexico over the 10-year period.

• change 'growing' to 'grew'

• add 's' to year

• change 'growing' to 'was grown'

• change 'usage' to 'use'

Correct this: Although the US began with more high percentage of online users, Canada eventually surpassed them.

• change 'surpassed' to 'passed'

• change 'began' to 'beginning'

• change 'more high' to 'a higher'

• change 'Although' to 'Overall'

Correct this sentence: The internet users in Canada climbed rapidly after 2000.

• remove 'The'

• change 'after' to 'in'

• change 'climbed' to 'was climbed'

• add 'the number of' before 'internet'

Correct this sentence: It is clear to be seen that football is the most popular activity for males.

• change 'popular' to 'highest'

• change 'seen' to 'see'

• change 'clear to be seen' to 'evident'

• change 'males' to 'females'

Correct this sentence: Men were twice as likely to play football compared to women in this age group.

• change 'as' to 'more'

• change 'twice' to '3 to 4 times'

• change 'this' to 'these'

• remove 'to'

True or False? Overall, the majority of men and women aged 18-20 are not engaged in any of the activities shown.

• True

• False

• Not Given

• Both True and False

Which country should you write about first?

• Iraq

• Iran

• Kuwait

• Saudi Arabia