Revision 1: WRITING

People/ my village/ live/ catching fish/ from/ nearby/ lakes/ ponds.

• People in my village live by fishing catch lakes and ponds nearby.

• People in my village live from catching fish nearby lakes and ponds.

• People in my village live catching fish from nearby lakes ponds.

• People in my village live by catching fish from nearby lakes and ponds.

The teenagers are interested in the harvest festival. (FIND)

• The teenagers find the harvest festival interesting.

• The teenagers find in harvest festival interesting.

• The harvest festival find teenagers interesting.

• The teenagers find harvest interesting the festival.

Mua sap/ a/ popular/ folk dance/ Thai people.

• Mua sap is a popular folk dance of the Thai people.

• Mua sap a popular folk dance is of the Thai people.

• A popular folk dance Mua sap is the Thai people of.

• Mua sap is a folk dance popular of the Thai people.

Traditionally, / children/ the US/ go/ from/ house/ house/ ask/ sweets/ Halloween.

• Traditionally, children in the US go from house to house to ask for sweets on Halloween.

• Traditionally, children in the US go from house to house ask for sweets on Halloween.

• Traditionally, children in the US go house to house to ask for sweets Halloween.

• Children in the US traditionally go from house house for sweets ask on Halloween.

Traditional costumes are very important for the Tay people. (PLAY)

• Traditional costumes are very important for the Tay role people play.

• Traditional costumes play an important role in the Tay people's customs.

• Traditional costumes play a very important role in the Tay people's customs.

• Play an important role costumes are traditional for the Tay people.

The ethnic groups gather at the center of the festival site. (MIDDLE)

• The ethnic groups gather center in the middle of festival site.

• The ethnic groups gather at middle in the center of festival site.

• The ethnic groups gather in the middle of the festival site.

• The ethnic groups in the middle gather at the center of the festival site.

Traditional music is an important part of ethnic festivals in Vietnam. (HEART)

• The heart of ethnic festivals is traditional music in Vietnam.

• Ethnic festivals in Vietnam is the heart of traditional music.

• Traditional music is the center of ethnic festivals in Vietnam.

• Traditional music is the heart of ethnic festivals in Vietnam.

The farmers/ harvesting/ their crops/ the fields.

• The farmers harvesting their crops in the fields are.

• The farmers are harvesting their crops at the fields.

• The farmers are harvesting their in fields crops.

• The farmers are harvesting their crops in the fields.

traditions/ The elders/ pass/ through/ often/ on/ their/ to/ stories/ the young/ activities. / and/

• The young traditions elders pass through on their activities often to the stories and.

• The elders often pass on their traditions to the young through stories and activities.

• The elders stories pass on often their traditions to the young through and activities.

• The elders pass on their young through stories and activities traditions often.

Many Asians/ go/ Buddhist temples/ pray/ good luck.

• Many Asians go to temples Buddhist pray for good luck.

• Many Asians go to Buddhist temples to pray for good luck.

• Many Asians pray to Buddhist temples for good luck.

• Many Asians go to Buddhist temples pray for good luck.