editing and revising 2

Front

What is the best way to revise this sentence: "As we drove up to our house, though, I am excited to see that my dad put up our Christmas lights and wreaths!"?

Back

As we drove up to our house, though, I was excited to see that my dad had put up our Christmas lights and wreaths.

Front

The dessert has hot sand, cactus, and rocks everywhere. What change, if any, needs to be made to this sentence?

Back

change dessert to desert

Front

The teacher was helpfull and showed the student how to work the difficult math problem.
What change, if any, is needed in the sentence above?

Back

change helpfull to helpful

Front

What change, if any, is needed in the sentence: Me and my brother went over there because they had lots of different board games to play? Options: Change me and my brother to my brother and I, change lots to lot's, change there to their, no change is needed.

Back

Change me and my brother to my brother and I

Front

What is the correct way to write the sentence: "20 million people almost visit Disney World each year."?

Back

Almost 20 million people visit Disney World each year.

Front

What is the correct way to write sentences 2 and 3? Options: According to past stories, Nessie is related to a type of aquatic dinosaur., According to past stories, Nessie is related, to a type of aquatic dinosaur., Nessie is related to a type of aquatic dinosaur, according to past stories., Related to a type of aquatic dinosaur, Nessie, according to past stories.

Back

According to past stories, Nessie is related to a type of aquatic dinosaur.

Front

What change, if any, is needed in the sentence: "We've got to go quickly, said his mother."? Options: change we've to we'll, change quickly to quick, insert quotation marks after quickly, no change is needed.

Back

insert quotation marks after quickly

Front

Which sentence could BEST follow: The students visited Angelo State University and toured the observatory? Options: The students went on a field trip., All of the kids got to ride on the school bus to the university., An observatory is a place where you can look at stars through a telescope., The telescope was huge!

Back

An observatory is a place where you can look at stars through a telescope.

Front

Which of the following is NOT a complete sentence? Options: Timothy turned his homework in late., He ran quickly., However, she was., The bird perched on the power line. 

Back

However, she was.

Front

The lite from the morning sunrise was absolutely beautiful.
What change, if any, is needed in the sentence above?
Options: change sunrise to sun  rise , change beautiful to beautifull, change lite to light , no change is needed

Back

change lite to light