EOC Writing Review #2

What is appropriate tone?

• The reader understanding the writer's emotions in a piece of writing

• How you feel when you read something

• I don't know

Tags

CCSS.RL.11-12.4

CCSS.RL.6.4

CCSS.RL.7.4

CCSS.RL.8.4

CCSS.RL.9-10.4

The massive circumference of the trunk however is the distinctive feature of the baobab.

• I don't know

• Comma after trunk and a comma after distinctive

• comma after trunk & comma after however

Tags

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

The History of the New Bike Path

1. Met with other trail riders

2. Wrote a petition

3. Found support

4. Planned the trail

5. Convinced city council

Based on Marty’s list, which organizational pattern is best for her to use?

• Chronological Order (steps)

• Cause & Effect

• Thematic Order

• Compare/Contrast

Tags

CCSS.RI.11-12.5

CCSS.RI.8.5

CCSS.RI.9-10.5

CCSS.RI.6.5

CCSS.RI.7.5

The trail was planned, the construction company donated a small bulldozer for demolition.

How is the trail was planned, the correctly written?

• Planning the trail, the

• After the trail was planned, the

• The trail was planned: the

• As it is

Tags

CCSS.L.11-12.3A

CCSS.L.7.1C

All of the riders worked together to design a trail that was not only challenging but also accessible to beginning riders with lesser skill.

How is lesser skill correctly written?

• least skill

• less skill

• As it is

• lesser, skill

Tags

CCSS.L.3.1G

Once the bulldozer had done the work: many volunteers donated several weekends to prepare

the trail for riders.
How is the work: correctly written?

• work, many

• work and many

• As it is

• work; many

Tags

CCSS.L.9-10.2B

If you don’t already have plans for your summer, this program is one of the best ways to learn about other cultures.

How is your summer, this program correctly written?

• As it is

• your summer; this program

• you're summer, this program

• your summer: this program

Tags

CCSS.L.9-10.2B

How is this sentence best combined?

My friend Tony Donato asked me to be his campaign manager in his bid for junior class president.

I quickly agreed.

• My friend Tony Donato, in his bid for junior class president, asked me to be his campaign manager when I quickly agreed.

• When my friend Tony Donato asked me to be his campaign manager in his bid for junior class president, I quickly agreed.

• In his bid for junior class president, my friend Tony Donato quickly agreed and asked me to be his campaign manager.

Tags

CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.5.1E

CCSS.L.7.1B

How is this sentence best revised?

Warning Tony that he needed to prepare really well for the approaching debate with Lorna, he wouldn’t listen to me.

• I warned Tony that he needed to prepare really well for the approaching debate with Lorna, but he wouldn’t listen to me.

• Tony, he needed to prepare really well for the approaching debate with Lorna, he wouldn’t listen to me, I warned him.

• Warning Tony that he needed to prepare really well for the approaching debate with Lorna is what I was doing but he wouldn’t listen to me.

Tags

CCSS.L.11-12.3A

CCSS.L.7.1C

This paragraph shows opposition (opposing side) in the persuasive essay.

• Body Paragraph #3

• Introduction

• Counter Argument

• Conclusion Paragraph

Tags

CCSS.RI.11-12.5

CCSS.RI.8.5

CCSS.RI.9-10.5

CCSS.RI. 9-10.8

CCSS.RI.11-12.8